I Brought the Supernatural into the World

Here are some suggestions. 1. It is best to pull out one specific setting and talk about it. For example, Neon and Huaxia are written together in the parallel world, and the realms of cultivation are divided. 2. You have written so many stories, but you have hardly written about the protagonist and the system. I know this is a behind-the-scenes leak, so it's normal that the main character doesn't have a role, and there's nothing wrong with that. But this also brings about a problem, ambiguity. Which events were deliberately scripted by the protagonist? Which events occur naturally based on the law of cause and effect due to the aura (supernatural) resurgence caused by the protagonist? Which characters (superhumans) were created by the protagonist? Which characters are native to the world? These are extremely important, but the poor expression makes me feel a little confused. Here's an example 1. Was the resentful ghost killed by the police and Yunu jointly created by the protagonist? 2. Is the summoning of several psychotic neon people created by the protagonist or is it natural? Would this have happened if the protagonist hadn't intervened? (In other words, does the protagonist's screenwriting income come from adaptation or creation) 3 I have beeped so much, but the above problems can not hide the flaws, and novels on this theme also make me feel refreshed. I hope my comments will make the novel better. Regardless of whether you, the author, change it or not, I will keep following it. The question I asked ended with one sentence: the setting is vague. As long as it is slightly modified, it will definitely be a great article. Five stars + collection for you

I have been reading novels since I was in the sixth grade of elementary school. Now I am about to graduate and go on an internship. I think I am very discerning. This book is more in line with my taste. It is very good. Good luck to the author! I read it again this year and I am still very satisfied with this book. It deserves praise.

I stayed up all night to finish it, and I have to say that this book is really good. It is one of the few books that I can read on Tomato (I have a bit of a picky taste). It's a pity that I just couldn't catch up and it's almost over, but the author must work hard and look forward to future collaborations (must remember!!!)

Sister Tangtang, well, the sister is the key point ◐▂◐This book does not destroy the three views, does not insult the reader's IQ, well, many recent novels disgust me. Well, you can read this novel with confidence. Generally speaking, it seems to be relatively relaxing, and the plot is quite exciting. The author did not intentionally overstate the word count (probably). It is one of the better behind-the-scenes novels. The characters in it all have their own characteristics and distinct personalities. There is only one female protagonist in this article, and she has enough dog food. There are many veteran drivers in the comment area, and they are very cruel. There are many male and female readers in the book, and the author's sister often comes out to communicate with her. The author is a professional when it comes to property grabbing. If you like this kind of novel, you can click on it and give it a try. You may see reminders for updates🐶

It looks good. The author will update it soon. I will keep following it. Come on ＾0＾~

First of all, five stars. The author's bacteria are very active. I communicated with the author for a few chapters, he is a very interesting person. After reading it now, I feel very good about the whole work. The author Jun created an interesting system for our protagonist to direct supernatural events, which is a very innovative setting. This also adds more possibilities for the protagonist and his characters to bring changes to the world. This sense of novelty gives people a very good feeling. The language style is brisk, which is what the author said when communicating with me. It's a bit novice, but I think it's pretty good. The author's writing content is divided into events one by one. Each person has their own characteristics, and the threads of the characters' fate may be connected. The protagonist in the author's novel opens in the country of cherry blossoms. This opening is novel and interesting. As a country with a rich ghost culture, there are naturally many materials to draw from. I hope the author can be worthy of such a subject. In terms of character creation, the character left a deep impression on me. Take Miss Rain Girl as an example. She is very gentle, comfortable, soft, and cute. Her cute personality really touches my heart. What she does is also in line with the character, which shows that the author has a good grasp of the character. No matter how much I praise it, I also want to talk about some of the discomforts I felt while watching it. (The author's writing was not very good in the early stage. I hope readers will have the patience to read it later and they will be surprised.) For example, the existence of the protagonist is very confusing and I don't quite understand the positioning, but overall it is okay. Finally, I hope the author will write better and better, come on! (*^O^*) [I've typed so much, please leave more comments, like more, and let's communicate together!

There is indeed something remarkable about this book What moved me the most was the love between Wu Song and Diao Chan. In order to save Wang Mang, Zhang Fei turned against his sworn brother, the Golden Retriever Lion King Xie Xun. Especially when I read that Guo Jing gave up his position as the leader of the Sun Moon God Sect and resolutely wandered around the world with the gentleman Jian Yue Buqun, it made me cry. Linghu Chong joined the anti-Japanese war to avenge his father.

It's really beautiful (just five words are enough.)

I give this book five stars. It has the same theme as the days when I was pretending to be gods and ghosts in Japan. I like this genre very much and the author writes it very well, but I also hope that the author will not be forced into the palace like Fang Zheng called back. Come on, author, I'm optimistic about you, I just got it

I read it in one sitting and gave it a 5-star rating. Advantages: The plot of this book is very attractive from the beginning. I don't think there are many flaws in this book. Some minor flaws can be ignored. Let me make it clear here that the male protagonist does not have a virgin and does not have a harem. Disadvantages: The plot development may be a bit fast (personal opinion) and some major problems are not available for the time being. (Can it be faster?)