A Family Beyond the Pass

Personally, I think it's quite true. It's not as awesome as other people who traveled through time. In fact, the ancient native people were very shrewd.

I like the description of Northeastern dialect such as: Galaha😀 It's not easy to write a book, but sometimes I didn't like the heroine's over-the-mother style, so I skipped through a few chapters. Those who don't know enough about books can read it😁

Fresh and grounded. Although it's a bit slow and lengthy, the environment and characters are all well thought out. Good review!

The women in it are either too soft or too extreme, but the story is still very coherent and interesting. I hope the author's future works will get better and better!

A good article does not need fancy words, plain words are also wonderful! ! ! !

The parents of people outside the customs are short-sighted, and their customs and slang are very vivid and vivid. I still prefer that the heroine has the cheerful air of a northeastern woman at the beginning, but then some things are handled that are not suitable for her temperament, which is quite confusing, such as the mother and daughter who covet Bai Shengwen, and the newly built house that was easily given away. However, this article is still worth reading

It's well written, I really like this kind of article! Real and homely!

It is often seen that the protagonist of time travel is written as omnipotent. This author did not write the protagonist as omnipotent. This is a good thing.

Nice! Read it again!

Not bad, it's just the beginning, the structure is still rigorous, and it's attractive to read on.