The Eerie Devouring of the Human World

It's okay, but there are a lot of typos, and the writing is a bit erroneous. I can only say that it's okay. The first part is good, but the second part is not so good. The ending is a bit rushed, and there is too little writing.

I don't like the main character very much. From a God's perspective, he's a bit too useless, but it's still bearable so far. I'll post it later.

Another urban Taoist priest