Devouring the Sun

It's not bad at the beginning, but it's too fast at the end, ugh

I also want to play with my account and sent you a small one.

Good, I like it very much, very clear and organized! It's like being there! There is a beginning and an end! Please also stop using some modern words, because the subject matter of the work itself is a martial arts fantasy novel.

No roots, no feet, no immortality, no surrender, no fear of death. With great blessings from heaven, I conquer the world all the way!

It's okay, but the pace is a bit fast

I feel like I can still write more later, but I don't know why it ended.

Wonderful, good-looking and good

Very beautiful and fascinating!

The writing is so wonderful, I hope to see the next work

It's not bad, but not many people have watched it, so it's not recommended.