None*

The characters in the book are vivid, and some of the short poems in particular make people fall in love with them. I still remember one of them: The wind and rain are blowing on the road, and the apricot blossoms are fragrant for the wine. Let's go and find a dream when we are drunk. When we wake up, the bright moon will pass over the cold river.

It's very good. It's much better than those novels that talk too much, kill people at every turn, and bicker at every turn. This novel is more real.

I have a profound foundation in ancient Chinese poetry. There are few works about cultivating immortals that are written with such a high level. It is a very unexpected surprise. I personally like it very much!

This is currently a novel that I have seen with excellent writing quality. The author's solid literary skills and meticulous consideration are demonstrated in every word!

This book is very good, other book friends have already commented on it with praise, so I won't show off my talents here. I would like to make some small suggestions here. This novel is suitable for book lovers with a peaceful mind, a certain education and a certain reading age. First of all, this book is a realistic cultivation novel. It is different from the popular upgrading cultivation novels on the market. The situation of the protagonist described in the book is very similar to the situation encountered in real life. The character of the former protagonist is a relatively peaceful person who knows the world but is not sophisticated. Some book friends may think that the protagonist is a bad person, and because it is more consistent with real life, we sometimes feel annoyed. Secondly, I recommend book friends with a certain level of literacy to read this book because it is a semi-vernacular text, so if you are not literate enough, it will be more laborious to read this book. What we pursue in reading novels is a pleasurable process. If reading is laborious, then reading this book is not as good as reading a Chinese book. Finally, I recommend book friends with a certain amount of Shu-ling to read this novel because only after you have gone through so many conventional novels can you feel the goodness of this novel. If you haven't experienced thousands of formulaic novels, you won't be able to bear to read this novel.

The author has a rich cultural heritage and fluent writing. He has a vivid understanding of Taoism and describes the scenery from his heart. The article structure is clear and layered, and the overall concept is acceptable. I believe I can write better works in the future. My views have been expressed in the last chapter.

This book is like life. As long as you live, you are on the road, a journey with no end in sight. The mentality of reading the story is different, and the requirements are also different. If you like reading cool books, don't read this one. This is a book related to spiritual practice. I remember the couplets on both sides of the theater in the village when I was a child: "Use the past to remember the ancients, and use the ancients to warn the present." Personally, I think this book has a worthy story, and the wording and writing skills are much better than most authors. The author has read a lot and writes very carefully. I hope I can write a better story

I have read a lot of books about cultivating immortals, but this one is unique in its exquisite writing style and eloquent narration, which makes you feel like you are immersed in the scene. Especially the vivid description of the mentality of a lonely boy.

This book is the best I have ever read A good novel about cultivating immortals! The writing is capable and mature, and the plot has fascinating twists and turns. All the details are just right, no sentimentality, no virginity, and worthy of reading at night by friends who are not good at reading!

It's a pretty good novel. There's no natural waste material to counterattack, and there's no great power reincarnated. It's just plain. It's a pretty good novel that I've read in recent years. I highly recommend it!

So well written! The protagonist's growth process, although God helps others, is more of a struggle against his own fate that continues to make progress. The whole novel has a reasonable structure, a large scale, and very good writing style!

It can be seen that the author's artistic conception is extraordinary, he has a profound foundation in ancient Chinese prose, and the plot of the story is reasonable, not the kind of mindless writing.

Generally speaking, fantasy novels are boring and messy in the end because they are divorced from the basis of life. However, although the second part of this book is not as exciting as the first two, it is still considered to have good writing style and conception. It is a good work. I praise the author.

There is no deception or pretense, the author is careful enough and takes the overall situation into consideration. Thumbs up for your seriousness!

Reasonable plot! It's very comfortable to watch. The article on how to get to the top of the ranking has distorted the normal mind!

I finally finished reading it. The previous volumes on the Great Shang Dynasty and Tianlongmen's Going Overseas are concisely written, with a reasonable structure and diverse characterizations. It feels good to read. Although the following part about Going Overseas to Daxia cannot avoid the common problem of online writing, it also has reasons and extenuating circumstances. , But the character development of the protagonist as an adult is not successful enough. He performs poorly in the environment of cultivating immortals where he competes with heaven, earth, and people. He has no secrets of peerless skills and many resources. He always goes out to cause trouble and is afraid of trouble. Fortunately, he runs away quickly because of coincidences, and there are no dangers. Of course, running around and running around by chance also promotes the development of the storyline. After arriving in Kyushu and fighting in the fairyland, the writing may not be strong enough, and the description is monotonous and not very exciting. It is a pity that there is no heroine, and the few characters that are left are unclear or unclear. Perhaps on Lin Yi's eighteen hundred years of long road to immortality, these encounters in his past and present life are themselves scenery along the way.

Excellent authors slowly accumulate knowledge throughout their lives to write better books, rather than using one trick to catch up all over the world. But there is no right or wrong. In reality, you still have to live. Money, desire is like a sea of evil, like an abyss, either overwhelming or difficult to fill. There is nothing wrong with being ordinary, but who is willing to be satisfied? How can the word "desire" be so great? Five stars, prediction and outlook

Finally read a normal novel. Nice. I've read almost a hundred chapters so far. Than those cool articles. Most system documents look good. Those are all systematic articles that destroy people's three views. There is a system where every woman is in the bag, no matter how hard you work. Every second, every second. Tasteless. It makes people unhappy to watch. Frustrated. The idea is blocked.

I like this book. The writing is beautiful and the characters are intriguing. I understand the changes between dragons and snakes, what I should do and what I should not do. The plot is logically clear and my thinking is normal. I guess the author should be such a calm, restrained and principled person. He extinguished the spiritual fire of Zhengyang Sect by himself, and suddenly wanted to give up writing. As long as he wants to benefit himself, he will do whatever it takes. He is no different from those simple-minded people.

The plot is reasonable, and although it is about cultivating immortals, the characters are still humane, not extreme or bloodthirsty.

The author's writing is really good! Many characters are vividly drawn. Conceive Kit Kat. I feel like the author is sentimental and nostalgic. He is a person of temperament. Because of this, authors often get caught up in the plots they create and cannot extricate themselves. Due to the character, the atmosphere of the whole novel is depressing and addictive, instead of being bright and joyful, and the atmosphere of the whole novel is dull and dull. Although the author is very talented, the plot he creates is clichéd, deliberately full of loopholes for the sake of foreshadowing, leaving nothing to say and nothing to do. This is a common problem in online novels. It's good to be able to read such a long article! Open it for Sanqi.

The writing style is excellent, and the understanding of Tao is very layered. He has a profound foundation in ancient Chinese prose, well-spoken words, and vivid character descriptions. The article closely follows the title, from the initial longing to cultivating immortals, to doubts, from the monk's contempt for human life to wondering what an immortal is and why he cultivates immortality. The inner world of the characters is described very well. The only shortcoming is that the ending is too hasty.

This is my favorite novel. I like this style. The author has profound literary skills and the description of the characters' appearance, personality, and inner feelings is delicate and vivid. The plot of the story unfolds layer by layer, without being impatient or impatient, and is told eloquently. I have read a lot of books about rebirth, waste of talent, enmity, cheating and revenge, and harem. This book made me feel refreshed and made me feel calm and comfortable. The description of the scenery in the book, or the poems the characters want to say, all reveal the author's literary background. The shortcoming is the ending. The protagonist takes his disciple Nuer to the nine heavens. There is no explanation in the follow-up. It feels like it ends hastily. It would be great if there is a sequel. The book depicts some lifelike people, such as Zhen Yuanzi, who has been seeking the truth for decades but has gained nothing, and suddenly suffered a catastrophe. He finally has enlightenment before his death and has a glimpse of the threshold of the road. Although it is a novel, it is still heartbreaking. The confidante in the book has no results, which is a bit regretful. Anyway, this is a very good novel.

A rare good book that doesn't involve time travel or stallion! There are also poems, the author is very good!

It's been a long time since I've seen a book like this that is so engaging from the beginning and makes you want to read on. The author is a person with life experience, a person with clear logical thinking, and a strong literary foundation. I can't help but praise it 👍🏻!

Yes, the writing is so good that it can be called a blockbuster! It's time to make a TV series!

This is how the novel should be written. It is very realistic and tells the story of the failures on the road to immortality. It is much better than the protagonist who suddenly becomes a god. And the most important thing is that the protagonist never pretends to be pretentious and is low-key and smart.

How to say it! It's all right, yet sloppy! But it's still a masterpiece! It's not easy to read, it's like tasting wine! The world of Jianghu has lost the pleasure of grudges, but now has the artistic conception of tasting wine and discussing Taoism!

This is a novel in which the protagonist's spiritual practice is not exaggerated, and the human nature is vividly stated. Sometimes I want to kill people, but in the end, I still think that my mood is not enough. Life is like a dream, cherish and value it.

From the beginning, I felt it was okay. The writing is good, the content is substantial, the plot is reasonable, and it feels good to read. It can be seen that the author is capable of writing good articles. It can be seen that the author is trying hard to write his own characteristics and trying to get rid of the routine of cool writing. But in the later stages, I felt that the author was a little out of his depth, and even felt like a different person. The plot is dull and dragging. No ups and downs, focus. Everything along the way will be described in a straightforward manner. The prehistoric chapter is completely cumbersome and cumbersome. If you put some effort into the Kyushu chapter and finish it, it will add a lot of points to this web article. I would like to give some suggestions to the author to stick to his own style and improve the quality of his articles. When it comes to quality, think about output.