Fantasy: Please Don't Steal My Chance Again

Let's start with a bat… (I have to say, I have been staying at home for more than a month, and it's really uncomfortable!)

I haven't read it yet. When I opened the directory, I saw an evolved sea element. How did it evolve? Do you want to take it with a pinch of salt?

Are you here to annoy others? Spreading negative energy? If you write this character and then ridicule and attack him, it will not make the protagonist noble, but will make him appear childish and callous. Those who flaunt the basics of morality will run counter to morality, and those who praise the basics of morality will disgust readers.

Chapter 1: I just read the first page and I don't want to read anymore. What the hell, it's the Nine Sun Magic Skill, the Empress, etc. It's too poisonous. Fantasy is just fantasy. You're so weird.

The protagonist himself is not a good person, so why does he look down on that Lin Qianqian? What does it have to do with you to say that someone is a filial daughter? They didn't do you any harm, but instead prostituted a beautiful girl for free. Or do you think you dislike the other person's preference for the new and dislike the old, or are you a love brain? This kind of thought similar to mental mysophobia is very childish and ridiculous in my opinion, and it is also quite cold.

So much martial arts is necessary,

To be honest, I was deeply impressed by the filial daughter Lin Qianqian in it.

It's funny. The better the physical talent is, the faster you should advance. Pig's feet are cheating like this, and they are always compared with their peers. Isn't it interesting? My own cultivation is still so slow. Even if I don't use resources, I should be the fastest by just absorbing the spiritual energy of heaven and earth. What can I do if I don't need talent? Just to surpass the level and fight against the enemy.

It's not about writing Game of Thrones at all. . .

Chapter 1: ** per day, 10,000 per month? Work one day and rest for 29 days?

The protagonist is a bitch who likes to show mercy. Treat the enemy without cutting it off*. Stealing opportunities from others everywhere, can you survive the first chapter without a system? ?

Nuwa was promoted to the 10th place in the Hunyuan Promise Talents, and Kong Xuan was ranked fifth in the remake of Hunyuan 7. It's okay to charge for it.

Do you still remember that you guarantee five updates a day? Author

It's a pity. I felt that Lin Qianqian didn't handle it well. Although the girl is abnormal and a filial daughter, she has nothing to do with the protagonist. The protagonist destroys everyone's family and then doesn't care about anything for a while? Let's not mention that the girl likes the protagonist, and the protagonist has no grudge against the Lin family, but why did he kill the girl's father because he wanted to kill the protagonist? You killed his brother and abducted his daughter. You let him hold it in? After the killing, he told the girl that this was retribution for the Lin family, and then committed suicide? Isn't this girl nice to you? Not only does she want you to kidnap her and escape, but she also wants to protect you from harm, so why don't you just commit suicide? This is enough for the audience. Later, the protagonist takes on a disciple and directly understands the artistic conception of cause and effect. Ah? ? ? Cause and effect? Just accept an apprentice? That apprentice has nothing to do with the protagonist, but they have known each other for a while? The protagonist's understanding isn't that great, right?

Sow, sow, get well soon, waiting for you.

After reading a few films, I found that the character of the protagonist is not likable. This is the biggest flaw. It doesn't have the flavor of Fei Lu Shuang's novel. Have you ever heard of a saying that, when the sun rises in the east, I am the only one who is undefeated? After looking at a few more pictures, the character is still like this. To be honest, no matter how many chapters you write, this book will definitely be mailed.

Same as above, he asked for a monthly pass and gave him a promise of two chapters a day, but why the hell do you still have two chapters a day? Just a liar

It's really similar to a novel I read a long time ago called Kendo Juzun

What bothers you most about this kind of special treatment? Oh, so many people helped you before, but they didn't show any help at all. As soon as this Shangguan month comes, you are the happiest thing in the world? What's the meaning?

There are too many poisonous points, and the protagonist's character is a bit **, that's about it. I don't recommend watching it.

Can you update one book before talking about others? Waiting for the update every day, you keep updating for a few days, pretending to update for a few days, can you write well?

You must finish it. This one is so good. Why do you want to open a new book?

It's not very good-looking. The protagonist's cultivation level is always relatively low, so he can just sit and drain blood all the time. He is ridiculed and his opponents are killed in adversity, and everyone is amazed. It doesn't look interesting.

Don't take reading novels seriously for fun. Isn't writing novels just a matter of imagination? Just be funny

Can the plot of Sword Art Online be sped up? When will the next world be opened?

I didn't read the name of your chapter. How could it be so cool to belittle you first and then ask the protagonist to fight back? A real chicken** needs to be belittled if he has real strength?

A batch of **, a batch of ink marks

Relying on other people's luck for everything, brainless

If you don't write this book well, why would you start a new book? I really admire the author of Fei Lu. If you write this book well, you won't earn more than you would if you wrote a new book. It's just like that one (Evolution from the Big Tree). It's a book that could have become a classic. The old book is being delayed every day and it's a mess. I don't know how to maximize profits? Why bother reading books if they can't get up or down?

I hope the author's cheats for the protagonist won't be too outrageous. . .