
Pokémon: Tie Zhi Ye
神奇宝贝:牵绊智爷
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- Ongoing
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- 12.7M Words
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- Fanfiction
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- Anime Fanfiction
- Audience
- For men
- Updated
- 1mo ago
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Don't keep adding Xiaomei into the mix. It's annoying. Is the author of a passerby character a lolicon?
The author didn't write the female protagonists well. Although Xiaozhi admitted that those female protagonists were his girlfriends, there was no behavior at all. Even if you write it in a more ambiguous way, for example, after one night, how the heroine's body is when she wakes up the next day, and you don't write about the middle process, just let us know that Xiaozhi ate them.
Bond What is bond? Long-term companionship, deep friendship, this is the bond. You have conquered so many Pokémon, isn't that the same as the original boy? After taming them for a few times, they threw them into the backyard and let Dr. Oak take care of them. This is not responsible at all. The biggest point of this time-travelling novel is that it is like Xiaozhi who blindly tamed so many Pokémon. There is no need for so many.
The beginning of the tournament was particularly long-winded. We were already Kanto champions, and we were still indistinguishable from the others. It was endless, right? We had to climb up from the lowest score level little by little. How could the Kanto champion be so unworthy? Can't you crush someone who is so far behind in the ranking?
The further I look back, the more uncomfortable I feel. I say it's the heroine, but I really don't feel it. It's not that I have to go to bed, but what, at least treat everyone equally, right? The protagonist's attitude towards Serena is completely different from the attitude towards other heroines. Others can only be said to be lovers above friends. There is not much ambiguity to say that they are lovers. Only the attitude towards Serena is different. There are also emotional scenes, and they are particularly dramatic. It is a very awkward emotional scene because the protagonist is completely useless and does not have so much delicate thoughts towards other heroines. However, he ends up with Serena. How come the other heroines are not girlfriends? So I read it more and more unsatisfactoryly. The most interesting part of the whole novel is that of Carlos or Serina. The plots are very awkward. The other heroines are just as ordinary as water. Only Serena is different, so she doesn't seem to be the usual protagonist. She is said to have multiple heroines, but she is always regarded as a single heroine. After watching it for so many years, I feel really disappointed.
If you don't accept her, she won't have colleagues. It will delay the girl's life of fun. If she is a single heroine, write it down clearly.
A single heroine is a single heroine, and a travel companion is a companion. Why post pictures of the so-called heroine?
Thinking back on the Pokémon novels I was reading back then, Bird's Paladin was far ahead in terms of word count, and Bonding Wisdom and Perfect Start together were about the same as Bird's Paladin. Unexpectedly, the number of words has surpassed that of Bird's Paladin.
Can the author write about Xiaozhi's emotional drama? It feels like the heroine hasn't appeared in a long time.
Then the story of the Padia region is about to begin. I don't know how the author plans to introduce Orange Academy and Padya. Can he use the short animation Padya's after-school time as an introduction? Just like the short animation "Xue Erlan" was used to introduce the Xicui area
Halfway through the game, I wonder if the author has put too much pressure on the combat power. When Pi Shen hits the mythical beasts with heavy punches, he can only replace Togekis when he beats Sirona, as well as a bunch of mythical beasts. It is equivalent to using the lower limit to compete with the opponent for the upper limit. This actually affects the viewing experience.
To my surprise, Ai'er didn't enter the female main building. Aren't you planning to join in?
Is it a harem? If it's not a harem, don't watch it.
Huang from Xiaozhi Universe can also come out, right? It can be set that Xiao Huang is the last of the four people in the batch with Xiao Zhi. He went to Viridian Forest to activate the power of Viridian, so he changed his career to become a doctor. Now the initial Pokémon is Charmander, and Pikachu Chuchu is conquered in Viridian Forest. Ash and Pikachu should have a girlfriend, right? Although it looks like Hikari's long-eared rabbit Pachilitz, Alice's conductive flying squirrel, Lillie's Ice Nine Tails, Mamane's Torgodmar, and Yurika's Pikachu are all Pikachu girlfriend options.
Dare I ask the author when he will be restored?
In fact, there is no need to forcefully pull Sirona up in order to highlight the finals of the Eight Masters, or forcefully add drama in order to highlight the finals. Personally, I feel that the most important thing is the conception and development of the plot. . . After all, it's about adventure.
Congratulations on this book breaking through the 5,000-chapter mark. You are so awesome. The world of Pokémon is becoming more and more concrete with you. I look forward to the next 6,000 and 7,000 chapters. . . . . .
Can the author have some interactive plot with the heroine?
How can she be called a heroine? There is no emotional drama, she is just a companion. When she goes to a new area, she changes people. She might as well be traveling alone.
I saw the author's picture of the female main building, and then the content of the article, that's it?
Author, you might as well stop writing.
The author must recover well before updating
There seems to be very little interaction between the heroine
Will Xiaozhi conquer Mew?
Those who were still fighting in the first sentence have evaporated out of thin air in the second sentence. Not even an explanation.
I was attracted by the heroine, and after reading hundreds of chapters, I was curious and looking forward to the content. However, after reading more than 1,700 chapters, I was disappointed. Until I saw the plot of Xiaozhi's emotional intelligence being opened up for no reason after arriving in Kalos, confirming his relationship with Serena, and meeting his parents, I felt that I was really cheated. The points I spent were just like feeding the dog and learning a lesson.
I really want to know if there are only female protagonists in the main building, or are there some female protagonists who have not been added?
She is said to be a heroine, but she doesn't look like a heroine at all. Bad review.
After reading two thousand chapters, I feel like the writing is too stiff, like an emotionless robot.
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