An accident summons student Xiang Tianlin and his older brother Xiang Wentian to a cultivation world. In the other world, a spirit-root test reveals that Xiang Wentian has a Heavenly Spirit Root and a naturally gifted Dao body.
His younger brother Xiang Tianlin, however, has only the lowest-grade Mortal Spirit Root and is naturally useless.
The world considers Xiang Tianlin a good-for-nothing, and the elders of the immortal sect decide to abandon him in the Ten Thousand Demons Cavern, where the chances of survival are slim. Though trapped in a desperate, hellish situation, Xiang Tianlin finally awakens his innate skill as a Recognizing Summoner: he must possess knowledge related to a target before he can summon them. Desperate to stay alive, Xiang Tianlin clings to a single conviction in the pitch darkness: Once I make it back alive, I'll have my revenge on all of you. The timid, gentle character rises all the way to the top and makes an astonishing comeback!
This novel and its characters are entirely fictional. Any resemblance to real people or events is purely coincidental. Do not imitate.
What does it matter if a genius brother is raising a younger brother? Can't you afford to support an ordinary person?
All I can say is, go for it! Hope you don't get hit by the data!
The writing is very messy, and the punctuation is unclear, especially the first few paragraphs, and the paragraphs are not clearly divided. If you write it for a long time without dividing it into paragraphs, you are really writing novels in Feilu. Feilu mainly writes cool stories. There is no market for your kind of sadistic style.
The author's writing style really makes me uncomfortable. If I am talking about an author with strong writing skills, it seems to me that I can imagine the scene in a flash. But what you wrote makes me feel like I am translating literature from a dictionary. If you write more subdued, there is no problem, but the paragraphing of your article is really problematic. Hope it can be improved. Then there is the issue of emotional lines. The relationship between the protagonist and Yasuo feels very confusing and so on. There is also an introduction, introduction. I thought that the protagonist gained an ability that was unique to him, but I didn't expect that it was a system.
How to say it? The content is very good, but it's a bit uncomfortable to watch.