I Have a World

It would probably be readable if the omniscient godhead was not mentioned at the beginning.

Your inventory has been seen throughout history. The famous people of the era were not recognized by the previous dynasty, and they were recognized by the current dynasty without saying anything, and they were not recognized by the later generations? What you said at the beginning is basically clear. Will future generations not recognize it? Treat all the great figures of the past dynasties as fools

I suggest that the protagonist be made the younger brother Zhang Qiling's brother, and continue to remain aloof. You can use the heroine of the original work, and create a heroine who is also very good at tomb robbing to accompany the protagonist. Try not to open a harem, otherwise it will easily break the character. There can be two female protagonists, not more. I still like to continue to play the role of the younger brother in the tomb robbing novel~ After reading the tomb robbing notes, I felt that the younger brother was too lonely, so I found a powerful female protagonist to accompany the younger brother to rob the tomb.

Isn't it wrong to have a patent right thousands of years ago?

Do you buy equipment only when you need it and don't give the troops time to train? If you start fighting on two or three fronts without mastering the new equipment, all you will write is the "aura of the protagonist."

Please don't be a keyboard warrior. This is a novel, not reality. Don't read it if you can.

At that time, it was all a public-private partnership. You opened a supermarket? Didn't even go to junior high school?

I, Lao Li, was also a handsome young man in our hometown back then.

When you write a conversation between people, please consider whether your word is suitable for this scene. I find that you often write a word that was born in the Internet era, such as seconds, seconds XXX. It is hard to say whether there is a concept of seconds in this world. Even if there is, instant kill, seconds are too dramatic. It is not much better to write instant kills. You use so many words from the Internet era that I feel embarrassed.

** Years ago, airplanes were mainly biplanes, and there were basically no all-metal airplanes.

Speaking of Shen Gongbao, I think of Shen Gongbao in the cartoon Nezha Legend I watched when I was a kid, em. . .

It's not just a hammer in the east and a stick in the west

Damn it, the saints in the courtyard will probably be fine again.

Write that one, this one is a bit ugly

Why do you like to change the names of Fei Lu's books casually?

Brother, look at how other people write? (Hello** I'm from the future) Why are others writing this novel better than you?

Why do all the apartment fans think that Boss Huang's investment is just giving you money for fun without asking for anything in return?

How do you play Sanqing or something?

There are so few updates on the shelves, most of them require...

I finally understand why book friends say that you can't read this book with your brains in mind. How about flying the J-Five Religion and then flying a World War II-era fighter jet? Well, even if you fly post-World War II jet aircraft later, your overall industry can be upgraded to the level of the late World War II. Even if you have the equipment, you will not be able to produce aircraft. Are the design of the aircraft and the aircraft engine so easy to build? Really illiterate

Author, you sent the last one by mistake

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