In Konoha, My Life Turned into a Game

What's going on later? Why are there so many LoL skills but so few Naruto skills? This is Naruto fanfiction, not LoL fanfiction. The female characters act like they've never seen a male character before, immediately trying to seduce the protagonist. The swordsmanship gets even more ridiculous later on; Naruto isn't an anime about swordsmanship.

If I were to be reborn into the Naruto world, my first choice would actually be Kumogakure (Hidden Cloud Village). I could grow up safely there, and aside from anything else, the Third and Fourth Raikage would be someone I could trust and wouldn't resort to dirty tricks.

Those who come to read fanfiction have probably already read the original work, so I don't need you to retell it. Your writing is practically the protagonist's interpretation and critique of the original. This fanfiction is turning into a Naruto reading comprehension exercise. Your everyday writing skills are terrible.

In truth, the Second Hokage was no less corrupt than the Third. His contributions and harm to the village were roughly equal to the Third's: forcing Madara to flee, causing the Uchiha clan to decline, and leading to the disbandment of the Senju clan, among other things. However, he wasn't criticized as much because of his strength, positive character portrayal, and early death.

Does Sasuke really have a good older brother? His brother always tried to control him, even going so far as to attempt to use Kotoamatsukami to control him. Having watched the entire Naruto series, I think Sasuke is the most normal character in the story. Although he's arrogant and has an extreme personality, and gets cocky whenever he has a little strength, he has personality weaknesses. Compared to Naruto, you realize Sasuke is a normal person.

Review of Chapter 1, "Life Became a Game," of the novel "In Konoha, Life Became a Game" by Bei Cheng Nan Sheng.

A 1000 push-ups at three years old? That's so awesome! Even a normal person couldn't do that, let alone without chakra boosts. Didn't you blush when you wrote that?

The Rise of Alien Races? The Rise of Alien Races in Naruto? I didn't expect the author to be a fellow traveler.

I don't understand why every book has to complain about how Sasuke only awakened one tomoe on the night of the massacre of his clan. Sasuke was only about 6 years old then, how could he have awakened the Mangekyou Sharingan already? Madara lost several brothers when he was young, but he didn't awaken one tomoe even if one of them died.

Why don't you just give them X-ray vision? Why do you have to add white eyes and remove their physical features? Rolling your eyes is just a way of showing off.