
At Sea: Black Dragon Form from the Start
人在航海:开局黑龙形态
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 1.0M Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- Faloo
Synopsis
All-time: Reads, Flowers.
670Chapters
6.8MReads
73kFlowers
10.0Score
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In Bleach, even a top figure's sword is only 15 million degrees Celsius. Maybe Unohana Retsu can't defeat Captain Yamamoto. The author thinks that there are many people in the pirate world who can resist a strong unit with a stellar mass. They are only Shendao level, not surface level, and they can't even destroy the planet. Even if the unlocking level is about 20%, it can almost level the land. Also, at first glance, the system of the Fairy Tail world is even higher than that of Pirates, yet it is written so weakly. .
It's not just about this book, it's a book like this. It's obvious that the characters you summoned can conquer the world, but you still do it bit by bit. Is your brain flooded?
The author's writing is a bit outrageous. The protagonist is alone on a small island at the beginning, and his body is not said to have been transformed. He lives for a few years, fights with gangsters for a few years, and easily kills pirates with millions of bounties. Gee, the author really thinks that we modern people are supermen. How many years of living on a small island can we become supermen?
The abilities gained are too many and too complex! Even the power of the Black Dragon has not been thoroughly used, so there are Wood Release and Eight Gate Dun Armor. Then why not write about the Immortal Body, Wood Release, Samsara Eye, and Eight Gate Dun Armor systems instead of Black Dragon?
Sister Hua can't fly??? Was the spiritual power paving the way eaten?
The awesome protagonist has gained the power of the black dragon, but everyone can't separate from the protagonist.
There is no expressiveness in fighting at all. When fighting Garp, I just stepped back ten meters. Seriously, I, an ordinary person, can kick someone seven or eight meters away with a running kick. Uh, a saint who steps ten meters in one step?
Cong Yunqie is very dramatic. Although pirates don't know how to use swords, don't you feel awkward holding a Guan Dao?
I really wanted to laugh when I saw the 29th picture that said Wang Zhi was arrested. Now let's talk about Wang Zhi on Rocks' ship. Isn't Wang Zhi in jail?
As far as the setting and performance in Bleach are concerned, to be honest, the top ones are all at stellar level, and the strongest in One Piece is only at Destruction Island level. Not to mention the material world created by the Spiritual King through spiritual compression, but you can compress the invisible air into a material form of stone. How high do you think the density is? Also, the Death God's power system attacks the soul. Except for a few fruit abilities, I really don't know how to block the characters in One Piece. He can hit you, but you can't hit him, and you can't block him. Isn't this a crushing power system, dragon. But the character written in this article is really weak. Even Kaido can beat the pace of the Thirteenth Division.