The Beast-Taming Age: Armored Warriors

The protagonist, relying on his cheat system, is arrogant and reckless, acting without regard for the consequences. The exposure of his cheat system ultimately harms both himself and others; he's practically a spoiled brat, a husky, and a honey badger possessed by his own body.

The male protagonist acts without thinking. In his eagerness to woo a girl, he directly reveals his special abilities to a neutral organization, leading other factions within the organization to label him a loyal follower of the female protagonist's faction. In other words, he's essentially given a huge gift to the "male pig" (a derogatory term for a woman), risking his own and his parents' lives for it. Yet, you all treat him like a loyal eunuch before the "male pig."

Rewrite it. The sentences are disjointed, frequently broken into phrases, one paragraph here, another there. In the end, it's completely incomprehensible when read together.

I feel the armor in Kamen Rider isn't as cool or stylish as the Saint Seiya armor.

Why does it feel like the chapters of this book don't connect? Is the author presenting each chapter as a separate event?

It looks choppy; some parts are not connected.

The reading experience was disjointed; many chapters lacked coherence, and stories from one chapter to another were disconnected. What was supposed to be a single event ended up being two or even three interconnected stories.

The main content is good, but the sentences are really awkward and need to be revised.

The genre and everything else are fine, but the language feels a bit awkward, and the overall fluency is poor.

I feel like I've read this novel somewhere before.