The Beast-Taming Age: Armored Warriors

The protagonist relies on his cheat system to be arrogant and does things regardless of the consequences. The protagonist's golden finger is exposed and everyone knows that it ends up harming others and himself. He is simply possessed by a naughty kid, Erha, and Flathead Brother.

Male pigs do things without thinking. In order to attract girls, they directly exposed their golden fingers in front of the neutral organization in the world. They were recognized by other factions within the organization as the direct descendants of the female pig faction. This means that the male pigs gave a big gift to the "boar" and did not hesitate to expose themselves and their parents to dangerous situations. However, you regard the male pigs as the direct eunuchs in front of the "boars".

Rewrite it, the sentences are not fluent, sentences are often broken, one paragraph here and one sentence here. In the end, I didn't even know what the hell it was when I stood up to look at it.

I feel like the armor in Kamen Rider is not as handsome as the Saint Cloth.

Why do I always feel like I can't connect to every chapter of this book? Author Is this a chapter and an event?

It doesn't look smooth, some places are not connected.

The reading experience is not smooth, and the stories between many chapters are not connected. The stories in the previous and following chapters are not connected. It is obviously about one thing, but it turns out to be two or even three stories connected together.

I feel that the main body of the content is good, but the sentences are really not smooth. It would be better to revise it.

The genre is pretty good, but the language seems a bit awkward and the overall flow is too subpar.

I always feel like I have read this novel there