My Years

Naruto's most regrettable couple: Me and Hinata, me and Tsunade Hime, me and Hanabi, me and Ino, me and Lin, me and Shinai, me and Tenten, me and Kurenai, me and Konan, the most pity is the author and Chiyo, the author and Koharu who transfer to bed

I wanted to create a protagonist with a high IQ, but the protagonist's vision was limited to the small pond of Jinghai from the beginning to the end. The more I watch, the less interesting it becomes. This is not the case whether it is political games or business competitions.

Perspective: One day is tied from the first chapter, without interruption. Thoughts: Starting from the first chapter, the early plot is relatively green. The protagonist is full of astringent thoughts and treats the Sims as a galgame. There are also many shortcomings of the protagonist, but the author gradually makes up for these shortcomings in a very reasonable way. This is very surprising. Because many other Genshin Impact novels almost ignore this aspect and treat reality as a game. The emotional line is a little weak. The emotional line in this one is really well handled! ! ! Emotions are also gradually sublimated. The protagonist in The Sims does not win the love of girls overnight. There are trigger points. What I personally like most is Amber's childhood sweetheart and the protagonist's pursuit of the piano. They are all gradual and there is no love at first sight. The well-drawn part is that Amber couldn't help but attack Diluc when she saw it. I think this detail is very well written. It's a bit far-fetched that Diluc didn't pursue this point in the end, but this detail was something I didn't expect. The author is very strong. Another thing I like is Barbara's feelings for the protagonist and for Qin. She likes her sister and the protagonist, but the protagonist is not in love with her. She longs for the powerful Qin, but at the same time she hates why Qin always takes away the people she likes. When Qin is injured, she wants to save her sister, but she also wants to see if the protagonist will choose between Qin and herself. The emotional entanglement in this part is handled very well! This is one of the reasons why I think the author of the above two is delicate and powerful, and everyone can read it. Of course, there are many shortcomings, just like those criticized in the comment area, but I don't think it's necessary to point them out so quickly. The reason I say this is that from the beginning to the end, the author gave me the feeling that the author is a person who is very good at designing plots. It is unlikely that he knew these problems but did not deal with them. It is probably just a foreshadowing. Just like not accepting Amber at the beginning, but later using the somatosensory mode, he immediately knew the mistakes he had made and tried to make up for it. The author also added that such compensation was not enough. I don't know how many people find it difficult to understand such a plot, but the protagonist did go from being young and trying to evade responsibility at the beginning, and gradually grew into a responsible guy. The original mentality of playing galgame changed to realizing that simulation and reality are real people with feelings, not a simulation game. A protagonist with growth potential. In addition, he has just traveled to Liyue, and the current growth of his strength and character has obvious positive changes. The foreshadowing of his shortcomings is just the right foreshadowing. This is the second reason why everyone can watch it. I suggest that you don't criticize the protagonist whenever you see him making a mistake. Although I also feel uncomfortable with some parts, looking at it now, I feel that the author is serious about designing the plot and character. If you watch the subsequent plot, you may find that there is actually a reason or the change is very exciting. And there really aren't many novels that Fei Lu can read. I hope you won't scold the author as soon as you see something unpleasant... If you scold and run away, there will be one less novel to read. Index: Out of 10 points, I give it 9 points.

Why do all novels of this type have to set up a brutal gangster face? Can't you set a tough guy with a handsome face? Can't I write without cruelty?

Author, are you okay with your brain? One O can account for more than a dozen senior inspectors? This is the level of supervisor O! You, a ** police officer, are showing off in front of a ** senior inspector? And the senior inspector is still afraid of Young and Dangerous? This author is determined

I won't even tell you whether it's much different. The price of this FGT **mm towed artillery is only ** pounds, which is 1 million yuan. The ordinary attack nuclear submarine in the United States only costs 300 million US dollars. China's 094 strategic nuclear submarine only costs about 10 billion yuan. The old model only costs 100 million yuan or so. You can directly start at 100 billion yuan. Brother, please ask Baidu. Baidu doesn't want any money.

Tell a joke and the envoy can't beat Kafka

At first I thought I was going to the lighthouse with absolutely invincible strength, but I didn't expect that the original intention of lurking in the violent soldier flow was to end the war with war. You are a coward. It's not like you only got the physical constitution and no soldiers. I was really speechless. If you say that this type was really cool 5 or 6 years ago, but now, it is too different.

Every article about becoming a star must have Yang Mi. Did she donate money? To be honest, I don't think she is beautiful at all.

I'm drunk after doing such crazy martial arts. You create the foundation with force. He also said that martial arts are scum. This doesn't mean fusion. What you wrote is a bit extreme.

If you don't like it when you see it, you will be in trouble. Curse my family, disaster after disaster

This book is coming to an end in the world of Naruto. Everyone has guessed it. The next step is to plant trees in various worlds. You can understand it as swallowing up various dimensions. Now the world is recruiting. . . .

Just by saying "Do you need a reason to save people?", You compare yourself to many protagonists who only care about money and rewards.

Do you have any misunderstanding about the Queen Mother? Shouldn't the Emperor's mother be the Queen Mother?

You write the indecisive protagonist in such a way that it makes me unhappy no matter how I read it.

This girl? What the hell kind of name is this? Have you ever talked to a girl? Is this what you call her? ?

Just joined the chat** I've been preaching for 500 years, isn't it just superfluous? Is it time for other martial arts worlds to have 20th generation heirs?

This is the only book I've ever seen that received unanimous negative reviews from the review section.

It is equivalent to talking about 2 reborn people

The word "lick" is very good

To be honest, the reason for the war between the protagonist and the two star gods is completely nonsense. There are many planetary civilizations that have been destroyed by the company. When those civilized planets were destroyed and persecuted, the Amber King did not appear. To put it bluntly, unless there is a disaster like breeding, there will be no such thing. The appearance of the Amber King and Pinoconi is even more complete, because the protagonist destroys Tonghe, so if you tell Gefimu to resurrect Order, it will be fine. It's really funny. Tonghe fights the protagonist for the remnants of Order. This is completely deliberately provoking a war between gods. It's inexplicable.

The setting of Metagross is that it is impossible to learn teleportation, nor can genetic moves. I think it is reasonable, otherwise it would be too scary to teleport with such high physical attack.

Come on, why not buy one? I really like the male protagonist and hope he will continue to be beautiful.

Are there any similar books you recommend?

MiG 15? ? I dare say that Maozi's airplane cemetery doesn't even have this thing, it's only found in museums.

I've already written a lot of random words later.

If the Infinity Stones are out of the Marvel Universe, they will be of no use at all!

The heart of God? Isn't it the Eye of God?

After reading a few chapters, Yu Xiaoqing's family is not that powerful and is not a direct lineage of the Central Army, but it is still very good in Yunnan. I guess it should be at the level of military commander.

Can. The lockdown has finally been lifted again.