Tale of Immortal: I Am the Sacred Lord of Humanity

Join my Fengling Yueying Sect and fight three thousand emperors with one hand

First blood, the introduction is a bit cool

The author probably has never read any novels about cultivating immortals. There are no fighting scenes at all, and the logic is confusing. One is to ascend to immortality, the other is to practice qi, the next is to transform into a god, and the next is to gather spirits. You can't write step by step from the qi training period to build the foundation, transform into crystals, golden elixir, gather spirits, Yuanying, transform into gods, gain enlightenment, and ascend to immortality. I watched it for a long time and I didn't know what level the protagonist was at. Why do you always write about supporting characters? The supporting characters have nothing to do with the protagonist. Does his transformation have anything to do with you, a protagonist who is in the Qi training period?

Commentary on Chapter 2: Rebirth in the Eight Wildernesses of the Ghost Valley, The Way Points to Tianyuan Shenshan, written by Han Xueye Guiren in "The Eight Wildernesses of the Ghost Valley: I am the Saint of the Human Race".