I Play Whitebeard: I Destroy Konoha from the Start

The writing is good, but don't make Naruto too weak and Pirates too strong.

The timeline is very problematic. Deidara was already in Akatsuki just after the Nine-Tails Rebellion?

It's still a question whether the Nine-Tails and the Tailed Beast Jade Whitebeard can handle it, not to mention Whitebeard's full strength.

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Can I still learn the overlord color and domineering spirit?

After spitting out what I wrote, the monkey demon called Sarutobi Hiruzen the master? Funny, there is also Uchiha Madara in sage mode? Does he have immortal mode? Madara and even the psychic beast don't have the sage mode. That's outrageous

Cloud Shadow Village uses a hereditary system, which allows sons to inherit the position of shadow. The Raikage in the past generations has been named Ai, so there is no abdication system at all.

You said that your character is nothing like Whitebeard. Do you call this acting?

The author has never seen Naruto's real reincarnation eye. Where is Nagato? Madara is using his ass to return the reincarnation eye to the borrowed reincarnation eye. Does Kishimoto know that this is such an awesome thing?

You call him Whitebeard, you're just pretending, it doesn't look like Whitebeard at all