
In Dragon Ball: Angel, That's Not Playing Fair!
人在龙珠:天使,你不讲武德!
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 1.3M Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 5y ago
- Source
- Faloo
Synopsis
All-time: Reads, Flowers.
472Chapters
6.4MReads
293.9kFlowers
10.0Score
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Reader comments 50
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No. 18: I'm about to be fucked again, it's too hard for me
I curse every reply. Every day, they are raped by the goddess in their heart. When playing games, they are all European kings. When playing Landlords, they are all king bombs. On the street, all beautiful women are chatting with them.
You go to class, go to class, talk to a bunch of mortals about the major universes, this god and that god, who can understand? Isn't this self-pleasure?
It's no longer popular to pretend to be a pig and eat a tiger. I've seen it too much and I think it's **
Are you an angel? Acting like a pig and turning into a real pig?
A good Dragon Ball fan novel is written as an urban novel for you, you are awesome
It's better to read the original work. The protagonist is just a judge. He has read more than 100 chapters without even starting a fight. Dragon Ball is a hot-blooded anime. Why did you write it?
With all due respect, in Feilu, you can type vertical and horizontal words without symbols in between. There are no more than five in Feilu, and they are all the big guys among the big guys.
The protagonist's attitude makes me more and more brain-hemorrhaged as I watch it. It's all about Satan, and he's pretending to be stiff...
It is true that you are an old author, but do you write the protagonist in the style of Dragon Ball or as a time traveler? You should know that what you write is for most readers to think it is okay, not just because you think it is okay. To be honest, what you wrote felt quite novel at first, but now I am a little tired of reading it. It can also be said to be picky, but there are really not many books on Dragon Ball that are still readable. I hope your next book will be one that readers can feel a strong sense of involvement in, rather than a protagonist who looks like a fool.