
The Black-Winged Great Demon, Starting from Impel Down
从推进城开始的黑翼大魔
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 945k Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 5y ago
- Source
- Faloo
Synopsis
All-time: Reads, Flowers.
433Chapters
5.1MReads
129.3kFlowers
10.0Score
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The introduction is the same as sand sculpture, you have destroyed an island, others can't catch you? It's like if you put a vase on the balcony and it falls and hits someone else, it's none of your business.
It's obviously a refreshing novel, but I didn't feel the slightest bit satisfied after reading twenty chapters. The protagonist is like a soulless puppet with no emotions or joys. Or maybe he's trying to create a so-called high character, but please forgive me for not being able to appreciate it!
Then why issue a bounty for pirates? Who dares to kill pirates?
It's a lie to be loyal after being turned into a Hollow. Lan Da used Bengyu to help Baiergang Arrancar, but he also rebelled in the end. I don't know that many people in Xu are dissatisfied with Lan Da. If he hadn't been too strong to suppress those Hollows, he would have rebelled long ago.
Garp doesn't know the lonely red, it's not nonsense
The protagonist wiped out an island full of pirates with one blow. Was the good guy immediately captured by the navy? Are the navy and pirates a group?
I watched the opening and felt it was very weird. The protagonist destroyed an island and killed the pirates with one blow, and the protagonist was not rewarded. Why did the general want to capture the protagonist? What damage did the protagonist cause to the interests of the navy? Knowing that he was powerful, he did not want to cooperate or try not to provoke him, but directly captured him. This made people feel very baffling. I suggest that the protagonist accidentally kill a few marines when exterminating the pirates, so that there is still a little bit of Xiaoheli.
Don't write about Roger casually. Roger may be a trap. His appearance destroyed Rocks. Maybe he was a Celestial Dragon.
I feel like Roger is a failure.
It's not that he will be absolutely loyal when he becomes a virtual person. This Roger doesn't look loyal at all.