Fantasy Westward Journey: Super Sign-In

This is ridiculous. You could write about returning players, but why write about newbies? It's so verbose. People who read novels about Fantasy Westward Journey are usually players of the game. This kind of writing is just not satisfying.

I don't know what got into you writing about a complete beginner starting from scratch. You're a pro yourself, so there's no way you can pretend to be a newbie. It's incredibly awkward to read.

The main character was a demon king at first, but after a few chapters it became a dragon palace, haha.

This book is ridiculous. It feels like it's just padding the word count.

Writing about a novice protagonist is unsatisfying and even frustrating. I'll take advantage of the current word count and start writing multiple new stories to guarantee a surge in readership and collections.

Commentary on Chapter 235, "The Twin Snakes Are About to Take Form," of the novel "Fantasy Westward Journey: Super Sign-in" by Fantasy Tianbang.

Anyone can be a commander? That's too easy! Famous commanders are all experts on every class in the game, and this traitor, some random woman, can fight against them? The author's "hardware is king" mentality is so naive.

Why do all fantasy novels sell good items?

Fast update speed means you get everything; slow update speed means you get nothing...

I haven't even finished the first chapter, this is so damn badly written!