King of Spells: Copy the Spells at the Beginning with No Lower Limit

These questions will appear in the same homework, hahahahaha

Let's put it this way, there is no problem with the overall content and the purpose of the protagonist, which is to save Nanami, Riko and the others. However, there is one problem. I found that the author does not understand the eye-catching core of fan fiction and has no experience. Everyone in fan fiction knows that they need to make up for regrets, but there are considerations as to what position the protagonist takes in the story and what role he plays. For example, everyone thinks that Shi'er's death is a pity, but you save him, and then you don't describe the conversation between him and you. There is no routine, and you just let the readers know that Shi'er is not dead. The story is too inconsistent, and sometimes the protagonist's actions are useless. The original character can solve the incident without killing anyone, but the protagonist's participation is only the last action, which is not fun at all. The battle scenes have also been briefly mentioned. Let me tell you that the description of the battle scenes is not good, and the story plot is not focused on the key points. This really needs to be adjusted.

I seriously doubt that the author can write it and put it on the shelves

It seems that Cai Wenjing's novels are not included. I think she is pretty good!

No, buddy, what the hell are you talking about? Is this all there is to mythology?

Comments on chapter 31 of "The King of Spells: Spells with No Lower Limit for Rewriting at the Beginning" written by Mao Bao: Hisuhito Knotweed, The Excitement of the White Night (Please give me flowers).

Ni Hong gets out of school at 15:15 p. M.

As long as you don't become a eunuch, someone will definitely watch.

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Comments on chapter 104 of "The King of Spells: Unlimited Spells for Rewriting at the Beginning" written by Mao Bao: Winning over Su Nuo, Bai Ye's back.

The writing style is okay, but the content is not ordinary. I often write some unappetizing plots, such as the majesty of a saint coming to life in g. When I went to Earth, I deliberately left the female character alone, but ended up being ridden by an unknown little yellow guy. The reason given was even more hilarious. Then to experience life, he deliberately divided himself into two classes with a girl, but it was inexplicably revealed that he was the one who stole the body.

Comments on Chapter 06 The Troubles Caused by White Night written by Mao Bao in "The King of Spells: Rewriting Unlimited Spells at the Beginning".

I thought I was a eunuch when I came back to life.

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It's true that it took eighteen years to go from Grandmaster to Grandmaster.

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