Spell Return: Summon Altair at the Beginning!

Devil fruits are all developed by yourself. You can only have one skill at level ten, so you can wait to die in that world. Anyway, the fruit of the surgery will allow you to die painlessly.

I felt that the plot arrangement at the beginning was quite unnatural, and I was a little speechless. The protagonist just copied the book in class, but fell asleep in the middle of writing. Even if he fell asleep, he couldn't even protect the manuscript well, and almost lost it, so it fell into Yukino's hands. If someone picked it up, it might have happened. The most embarrassing thing is that people misunderstood that the protagonist couldn't think about it. I felt very speechless. This plot direction is quite inexplicable.

It's all the same routine, nothing new. The whole tm is expelled.

Your novel about the Third Reich is very good, but your comic book is very bad. It can be said that the donkey's head is wrong and the horse's mouth is wrong. What does your profile say? But how did you write the content of this novel? The synopsis of the novel is completely inconsistent with the content of the novel. From this point of view, you can definitely be labeled as a clickbait and a hater of deceiving readers. And your writing style in the manga is purely third-rate. Compared with your writing on the Third Reich, it looks like two different people. I think you should mainly update the Third Reich type novel. I feel like you may not be able to grasp the genre of comprehensive comics now.

What the hell are you writing? It's nonsense. It's really messy.

When I saw the title Altaïr, I clicked on it and when I looked carefully it was Altair.

After reading the first picture, I read the comments and realized that the author chose a mage. If you have the IQ, you would choose a character with critical hits. If your mage doesn't have critical hits, what's the use of you? Because I have a talent that will be 100% realized as long as there is a chance. In other words, if you choose a character with critical hits, you will be 100% sure. It can crit, so your mage can't crit. What's the use of your mage? People with only IQ will choose characters who can crit because they have that talent. If you don't have that talent, it's okay if you like mages. But if you have that talent, why would you choose a mage? I'll really look at it again.

Author, if you can pass the review, I can only say that you are awesome.

It's time for Superboy-Prime. Superboy-Prime's performance was outrageous. One punch changes reality and makes you laugh wildly.

The characters are good, the subject matter is good, but the world is written wrong. If I write it as a comprehensive comic or change it to something a little more familiar, I will lose if I don't get good grades.

First Avi. Not necessarily Ren. . His name was Uncle Ren. Think about the relationship yourself. Secondly, there are too many novels that follow suit. I don't know who was the first to write this fanfic, but you are definitely not the first. Shuangwen is so happy. But you eunuchs have too many.

I've read several copies of Heart Signal, but I can't find the fanfic that it's great to meet you.

The protagonist is really fw and gets beaten all the time

Is this a large barrier still being kept low-key?

Picture 39, ** is broken, ** the protagonist

This system written by the author is like shit

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Didn't I remember that you rewrote this?