In Konoha, I Got the Paladin System from the Start

The start of the waste is really awkward

Sofa, why is tainted milk powder so popular again? Dear bosses, Prey is out of the trap, what else is going on?

After all, has the author read Naruto? Even though it's a fan fiction, it's impossible that he doesn't even know the timeline.

That's not right. The Uchiha clan was exterminated before Sasuke graduated.

Are you going to kill Itachi Uchiha? If you want to kill it, just watch. If not, do you plan to kill your father and mother like that?

The introduction is not bad, but I want to wait until it reaches 300,000 words or more before reading. How about the author directly sends the 300,000-word manuscript and I can read it directly?

How is it that the protagonist you wrote looks so withdrawn???? I didn't see it

I don't know what the author thinks. Although I haven't watched Naruto, I know that ninjas graduate at the age of 12 (except for those who graduate early). They go to school at the age of six and learn nothing, so they graduate at the age of six. Can you respect the original work and write about graduation at the age of six?

It is well known that the plot that the author of the fan fiction knows is likely to come from other fan fiction/*headings

The timeline is too messy