Wuxia: Ling Xing Teaches Me the Jade Maiden Skill from the Start
武侠：开局怜星教我明玉功
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 145k Words
- Subgenre
- Traditional Wuxia
- Updated
- 5y ago
- Source
- Faloo
Synopsis
All-time: Reads, Flowers.
77Chapters
1.5MReads
5.1kFlowers
10.0Score
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Reader comments 28
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For a year, the protagonist and Yao Yue did nothing. They didn't even know each other's identities. So what did the two of them do this year?
I originally thought it was going well, and the start could be pretty good. Your entire martial arts and the entire Ten Thousand Buddhas Dynasty Sect. Why. . .
Writing about Murong Jiu being arrested and going to Murong's house to save others felt like a failure. The content is too complicated and too specific. If you don't write about one thing in detail, you, Murong Jiu, can just arrange the things you don't want to catch to happen later. The result is that I went to find Lian Xing, fell into the underground palace and had sex with Yao Yue for a year, and then I wrote a lot about the Murong family. After I came out, I finally wrote that I was looking for Lianxing, but I saved Yaoyue and disappeared again, and returned to Murong's house to save people... What do you mean! The plot is okay and the plot is not cliche. However, there is something wrong with the order of the plot arrangement. Since it has not been put on the shelves yet, the author might as well revise and adjust it and repost it. This should only take two or three days, and it can also save some manuscripts and think about how to write later.
Why do you need the old bald donkey's martial arts in the beginning? Is it that I, Wanchuan Qiushui, Heaven and Earth Eclipse, and Light and Dust are not powerful, or am I, Soul Xi Longyou, not strong?
The protagonist has learned the Mingyu Kung Fu at the tenth level and is now a top-notch master. He invites the Yue Mingyu Kungfu to reach the tenth level and becomes a god on the spot. I'm sick of watching it.
Downstairs, you will know at a glance that you have never seen The Peerless Twins, and even Lian Xing doesn't know who it is.
I just want to see the Yihua Palace, but why are the Murong family all over the story? This order is really unreasonable.
If you don't know level 1 to level 9, if you know level 10, you are lying!
The timeline is messed up and the settings are messed up, and you are also arguing with the system. Who the hell do you think you are?
Comments on Chapter 3: Chaozong of Ten Thousand Buddhas (please give me flowers, please recommend, and please give me a review) in "Martial Arts: Kai Lian Xing Taught Me the Mingyu Kung Fu" written by Hei Yi555.