Demon Revival: I Slay Everything

Why is it written in such a mess? Many awkward places

It's better to write about the fate of the country

What can 3% Kamado Tanjiro do?

Editor, there's something wrong with your writing. It doesn't read smoothly, there are a lot of typos, and it's a bit verbose. Generally speaking, when reading novels, one puts oneself into the novel, but you don't feel it at all, as if you are a newbie.

There are talents upstairs, look at me, Dawei Tianlong! Eight times

Commentary on Chapter 5 The Misfortune of Master Liu's Family in "The Demon Resurrection: I Cut Down Everything" written by the Crocodile Bartender.

Comments on Chapter 7 The Ancient Soldier's Hengdao (Please give flowers!) In "The Demon's Resurrection: I Cut Down Everything" written by the Crocodile Bartender.

What is night without harvest? It's a little hard to watch