I Must Not Die Before the System Appears!

The idea is good, the writing is okay, the story is okay, and there is no big problem with the power system. However, I guess you are a novice author. There are some parts in the article that are not handled well and may even kill people. One is Bi Ye, where she almost killed the protagonist, but the protagonist beat her up and everything was fine? Tsk, the protagonist is too old and good, and there are those children. Let's not talk about the behavior of the brainless station Biye that makes readers unhappy. The protagonist has saved a few children before, but the result is also brainless. This is nothing. The important thing is the attitude of the protagonist. He didn't say anything, and he returned the compass as if he couldn't do anything with the children? Phew, the protagonist is an old lady, and secondly, the coachman, the coachman is quite stupid, the protagonist is not very angry when someone makes trouble, he even gets in the car, and he has a slight affection for that person? Pfft, please, when those people came down to beat you, they didn't say anything. They saw that you had some skills and stopped them. You still have a good impression of your ** behavior. The protagonist, Laohan, approved it.