Three Kingdoms: Man Proposes, Heaven Disposes

The character of the protagonist... Not to mention how polite, enthusiastic or generous he is, but his basic way of dealing with others is very problematic. The first time I went to see Wang Yun, I was rude. I thought that Wang Yun didn't look like a good person, so I didn't even say hello first, even though he knew he was his wife's adoptive father. Even if he is a strange elder, as long as he has no grudge against you, the protagonist doesn't even have basic courtesy? Not to mention ancient times, although politeness is not so high now, but when you go with your girlfriend to meet her parents for the first time, you also think that her father is not good-looking, so you think he is not a good person? As a junior, shouldn't you say hello first? The protagonist still has a certain hatred against the rich. What does it have to do with the protagonist how other people like Wang Yun live?

The more I read, the more it looks like Zhai Xing Tian Xia. Except for the different names, the first dozen chapters are almost the same as Zhai Xing Tian Xia.

There seems to be something wrong. We had already discussed with Cao Cao and Xun You that Dong Zhuo was going to Luoyang, but he still dared to go to Situ's house (his wife was Diao Chan (unmarried)) and then he said that he didn't know... How should I say, wait and see NTR? Or is he just a slut?

The scholar Zhang Jiao showed off my face. . .

Feilu is the best place for fast food. The way you write it is really ****. The biggest taboo in writing in Feilu is foreshadowing. There is an unspoken rule in Feilu that any foreshadowing that is not explained is treated as a formal plot. Let me explain it in detail. For example - suppose an author writes a plot in which the heroine is forced to leave the hero, and the heroine comes back to help the hero in order to inherit the family property. However, the author did not tell the reason why the heroine left, nor did he let the male protagonist know the reason why the heroine left. Instead, he made a sensational + foreshadowing. So what's the result? The comments section exploded with scores, and countless people criticized the author for writing about giving away his daughter. After that, even if the author ends the foreshadowing as soon as possible or changes the plot to make up for the mistakes, there is no going back, because - the people of Feilu are basically the type who never look back*. You have corrected it, but if people don't come back, who will you show it to? I feel that with the current situation, you probably won't achieve anything if you force it to be put on the shelves, so just start over.

Lao Cao is suspicious and likes people, including his wife. Even if he helps Lao Dong, he will not help Lao Cao. Lao Cao would think: The world is unified, he is so powerful, just in case, kill him, since his ability is not needed anyway, it is time to support other people's wives.

Is this written by the author after The House of the Three Kingdoms? But the writing is poor, it looks too embarrassing

How dare he express his uncertainty? Sun Jian's character is Wentai, and in the novel Guan Yu's character is Changsheng, which is changed to Yunchang. The princes are really bold, and if they make mistakes, they will directly GG. Wenjiu Wenjiu made everyone look stupid.

Jin and Yu are both jade, what is the word Yuyu? The name and the given name need to correspond. It's called Su Jin, and the given name is Ziyu or Zigui, which is pretty much the same. For reference, Liu Zhang was named Jiyu, and Zhuge Jin was named Ziyu. If you set up a counselor and use a nondescript word, that's enough. I am the lord, and I will definitely not choose to meet you. I'm a good person, even if I don't read, I will comment.

Because I still have work, I have fallen behind a lot on updating. I first put the new book "Kidnapping the Emperor with Cao Cao" on the shelves. The reason for writing a book for the first time is that I am honestly not satisfied with the writing of this book. It is always weird to borrow from "Zhai Xing" at the beginning. Having both books on the shelves should be enough to ensure food and clothing. I will make sure to update it when the time comes.