Urban: The Villain Came Looking for Me From the Start

The person who replied to this comment said that his brother has grown five centimeters and one centimeter thicker.

Earlier, I wrote about not knowing about the heroine's sister. Later, I wrote about the heroine in the original novel who moved her second uncle and followed the clues to find out the truth about her sister's death. Author, can you write whatever comes to mind? Also, author, what is the use of the identity and background you gave the protagonist? Any businessman has the courage to touch the top powerful family, but you, a top powerful person, can't do anything about them, don't you think it's useless? Also, the protagonist of the original work is too idiotic. He has no special abilities and is just an ordinary soldier who dares to curse at a banquet held by a wealthy family. Can such an idiot survive among mercenaries? The protagonist of the urban novel written by others must at least have enough ability or certain connections to stand out at the banquet of a wealthy family.

Forget it, I am completely disappointed with this kind of novel. It slowly deprives you of your luck, and then the original protagonist repeatedly jumps to death. You just can't kill him. It's like a mosquito that sucks your blood but can't be swatted to death. It has to be kept. We want to read a refreshing novel, not a frustrating one.

This book makes the main character of the original book a bit mindless, and the empress will be kidnapped in the future, and the main character is still in the spotlight, so that without the main character, she can't become the empress, and this is an urban novel, and the whole title of the empress feels really bad, but the main character is well described in writing, and the system selection rewards are very different. Even a pig knows how to choose, it is better not to choose, the system arranges it directly. I can't tell whether it is good or not, so let's raise it first and wait and see later. I hope Everything the author writes should revolve around the protagonist. Others are naive and brainless. Since it is a villain, the character should be decisive and aloof. Don't interfere in anything and stand out. If you have a background and a system, why should you care about ants? Even if you are the original The protagonist of the book, then develop yourself, he can't breathe under the pressure. As for the heroine who is attracted and chased by her own charm, the world is so big that there are no women who are not as beautiful as the heroine, but the author's writing is very good, there is no confusion*, come on

I've read about 40 chapters! The kidnapping section at the beginning is so vicious! And flirting with girls! Conversation for ten chapters in just one flirtation? Are you sure you're not writing a romance novel?

By the way, a trillion-dollar group is called the Empress! Isn't this too fake? So what level is Ma Yun and Ma Huateng?

It's quite the same in front of women. When I get to school, I start to act like a good guy again, and I even come out as a support teacher. Do you need a villain novel to express your positive energy? You have no idea what the audience for your book wants to see. There is no need to be approachable or to care about the world. Villains should do villain things. How dare you introduce yourself as a villain in a novel when you don't even understand who does what?

How free do you think you are when you still live in a dormitory and teach as a volunteer?

I found another very nice book

I feel relieved to see so many people trolling the author!!!! So poisonous!!!!!