I Am Yue Buqun

The protagonist is too *, the author insists on suppressing the protagonist, and the readers cannot or do not want to be involved. You, the protagonist, have to be afraid of this and that, and you have to act. You are already very tired of acting in reality. When reading your novel, you still need to introduce acting. Basically, many readers are attracted to it because of this. The author's imagination and writing are very good, but you are too depressing. If you can try to change your style, you should be able to become popular.

I feel that ordinary soldiers are very good, their strength is 50-60, but elite soldiers are probably not 70-80. Dozens or hundreds of elite soldiers can kill Lu Bu easily. The setting is not reasonable at all.

I originally called you the Encyclopedia of Martial Arts, so I'm sorry because my wallet is not rich.

I beg you to accept a few more. There are so many girls whose current record is still two (ーー;)

Reading Mi's book made me angry to death

A lot of nonsense, the golden finger setting at the beginning is really bad chicken

Let me tell you, no matter how talented you are in mathematics, you need formulas. Formulas are the most important thing in mathematics. For many algorithms, if you cannot give them formulas, others will not recognize you at all.

Damn it, are you playing checkers? There are always missing chapters. I skip a few chapters and skip a few chapters. Holy shit, it's so impactful.

The protagonist's role is a bit too little

It's very well written, please update it more quickly.

I was confused, which technique I should practice if I don't like Tianji Kung Fu.

You can go get the anti-evil sword manual to support Deadpool.

不正常女人，人生是你写玩命的女人

Laozi's Taoism and Confucius' Confucianism are both pioneers

Writing a novel does not require you to write about your personal experiences.

Also, you have written so many pieces, Ning Zhongze, do you still want to accept them?

According to the foreshadowing buried by Jin Yong in the original work, Linghu Chong should be the son of Ning Zhongze and a disciple of the Jian Sect. Foreshadowing 1: Linghu Chong's age Foreshadowing 2: Ning Zhongze's "special love" for Linghu Chong Foreshadowing 3: Linghu Chong and Yue Lingshan are destined not to be together

If it were just the world of martial arts, those with 0 abilities would be useful if they died and could be reincarnated, but the others would be of no use as they have no necessary functions. In this awesome world, you guys are of some use. In traditional martial arts novels such as Jin Guliang, internal strength is very important. Open a good device to absorb energy, and then open a world-class CPU to practice, transform and create martial arts.

看着看着就串台了，非常会做菜的小乞丐叫黄蓉，往后是不是还得有个武学理论大师叫王语嫣，睡觉只要一根绳的叫小龙女，非常会烧火的叫焰灵姬，非常会治病的叫端木蓉？

Comments on the fourth chapter of "I am Yue Buqun" written by Cheng Mengqiangu: Super-class, supreme, peerless.

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