Why Are My Disciples Such Monsters?

It was not easy to write this book, and it is the only book I have written in more than a year. But my subscriptions have dropped very seriously recently, and I don't want to just die like this, so I have a favor to ask you all! I beg you to take some time to point out which chapters of this book may be problematic for you, and I will do my best to revise them!!! Thanks

Ah, here, seven disciples of the Sons of Destiny and one stupid master?

I am not optimistic about the future of this book. The seven disciples are not women. They communicate closely with these big men all day long. Is this protagonist going to never return on the road to Brokeback Mountain?

But there are too many places where it seems a bit silly. It's okay for others to misunderstand that the protagonist is powerful, but why does the protagonist misunderstand others? Moreover, the protagonist's attitude is sometimes strong, and sometimes not strong when he should be strong, which makes some people unwilling to give up and prepare to do it again, giving people an unpleasant feeling that as long as they are ready, they will definitely be able to knock the protagonist off next time. Moreover, can we not write a plot in which a supporting character with little connection takes something given by the protagonist or even for free? Although it does not have as many scenes as the protagonist, it is a waste of emotions and makes me uncomfortable to watch. There are also villains, such as the emperor of the dynasty, who inexplicably became very hostile to potentially powerful beings, and searched for them on a large scale, killing his father and mother. If such a guy is hostile to the protagonist, the protagonist must shock him several times, otherwise it will appear that the protagonist is weak and can be manipulated.

*Leader: How can you fight a whirlpool without transcending the realm? Me: I just came to fight the whirlpool because I didn't transcend the world! *Leader: Then go and fight! Me: If you ride a horse, let me go. *Leader: You are not beyond the bounds Me: When I ride on a horse, I have to hit a whirlpool to reach the transcendent realm? *Leader: Then go and fight! Me: Beat your horse

How big is Lingzhou? Is there a radius of ten miles? Can eight people below the foundation level drain half of the continent's spiritual energy? Where has the spiritual energy gone?

Finally, there is a novel in which the apprentice is a man. It is not easy. There are too many novels about Fei Lu sleeping with his apprentice, sleeping with his daughter, and sleeping with his mother. This is a breath of fresh air. I support it!

As we all know, people named Ye are very awesome.

The writing strength is not very good, please polish it more.

To be honest, my first impression when I saw this book was that it was another book about having a harem under the guise of a master-disciple relationship. After I read the review, I realized that the apprentices were not all women, which made me a little more sexual. As for whether it is good or not, I have to wait until I read it before I can make a final decision.