The Fourth Young Master

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The main reason is that you have too many words in one paragraph. It made me dizzy when I read it, and I had no desire to read it. Basically, everyone read almost a paragraph of text, which is still readable. Your paragraph has hundreds of words in only one paragraph, and it gives me a headache just to read it. I read so many at the beginning, but I stopped reading after that. It was too much of a headache.

Li Zhi's life experience as a time traveler is too ordinary. I don't know how he can break out of Yunmeng University.

I saw your work in the comments section. Author, please change the title of your book. . . To be honest, the title of your book won't attract anyone. Also, it's best to be specific in your introduction, not too concise. . .

Author, when I read the first chapter, my head hurt a little. I am a fast reader. There are too many words in one paragraph, which makes my head hurt. I suggest dividing it into more paragraphs.