Xuanhuan: Plotting a Coup from the Start

This is not a novel, this is a script outline. . Hahaha, this novel is not for reading. The audio listening effect should be good.

I think you are writing a story, not a novel.

At the beginning, it was said that the villain of the protagonist is better than ten thousand people, the Regent, and then there are actually three families who are stronger than the protagonist. The protagonist is still a drug addict, and his talent is not good. So how did the original protagonist become better than ten thousand people? Is this the world of novels? This is how the big boss in the novel world costs? It feels like a story about the rise of a character in the skin of a villain, which is so fake and wrong.

It's too long-winded. It takes several chapters to explain things that can be explained simply. This was before it was put on the shelves. How can you retain people like this?

The subject matter is very good, but brother, just introduce it, you won't feel anything about it.

To be honest, after reading more than ten chapters, I know you are very good.

There are too many inner dramas and monologues. Watching this in Flurry will feel weird.

This novel is the same regardless of whether it has a main character or not. It's too watery. It feels like an introduction to other books. I have no desire to read it.

To be honest, the plot after the battle feels really meaningless, and it is really easy to seduce readers. The author puts a lot of restrictions on the protagonist every day, and big forces will pay attention to it at every turn.

What I want to see is the plot, not your explanation, not your bad word count