Kai God: Starting with Kamen Rider Zi-O

Dear readers, the author feels that King Shi's appearance is not very good-looking, and I believe readers feel the same, so the author decided to change it. 1. Add the place where the card is inserted in the middle of the Zunhuang drive. 2. Change the appearance. The author is a person who likes symmetry very much. All changes are made. The head has two ice axes like Zero, with a green dot in the center. The front face is like the armor Yatales. The upper body is the same as Toki-oh, dark purple with lightning marks. The shoulders are the shoulder kai of Hiei's armor. There are wings on both sides of the calf. This is the same as Hiei's calf. The arms are equipped with timepieces like Toki-oh. Well, that's it, if readers are not satisfied, you can make some comments.

Reads well without punctuation marks

Dear author: Why do you need eunuchs? Your stance is too shaky, and there are no big problems with book reviews. If you just use eunuchs, wouldn't all your efforts be in vain?

Can't you add punctuation marks?

It's only been three chapters and I've written the four characters "Tokiwa Shougo" wrong several times.

From today on, the author will use quotation marks as much as possible

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Commentary on Chapter 5: Shingo Tokiwa's Transformation in "Kai Shen: Beginning with the King of Time" written by Yun You.

It would be much better if the author could correct the typos at the beginning.

The subject matter is good, but there are a lot of typos.