I'm in a Comprehensive Comic, but I Got the Fenghou Qimen?

I'm afraid that the task can't be completed even if I post *

Earlier in the diary, it was written that the protagonist met Lin Pingzhi's gangster Yue Lingshan, but later on, Yao Yue and others still thought that the protagonist was capable of pinching and calculating. They were just stupid.

Is it wrong to write that the protagonist joins Lun Ye's club? It seems that the author is the same as Lun,

Your Yukinoshita family is too much of a show. They are obviously just wealthy locals in a certain area, but you have suddenly written them down to the fourth house level.

The Dragon King will eventually become his son-in-law√

Either let him crawl quickly and die socially, or simply don't write this character. Author, you won't tell me that you like An Yilun very much, right? Then you have a really unique taste

The author dresses as a woman and has gone out to socialize. Is there no more updates to this book?

The author writes well. I feel like he is becoming a bit mentally retarded as he writes more. The plot should be more reasonable. The golden-horned giant beast is almost being written as an ordinary ** by you. You don't need so many talents, skills and blood inheritance? Or is it growth, after so many chapters, is it still the fifth or sixth level of the planet? Do you want to write 100 chapters of Breaking Through the Stars? I'm speechless. Can you say goodbye?

Don't wait until those idiot parents want to completely ban novels from writing about divorce, suicide, and real events. There will be no novels to read.

** This comprehensive yy cool article always talks about a lot of nonsense and makes me vomit.

There are too many typos, basically in every chapter, and some of them require guessing to understand, which is very annoying. The writing is obviously good, but it makes people uncomfortable because of the typos.

In fact, when it comes to being dirty, the second generation is not inferior to the third generation at all, and his contribution and harm to the village is similar to that of the third generation. He forced Ben to leave, let Uchiha decline, let the Senju disband, etc. However, it was because of his strong personality and his early death that people did not criticize him. To be honest, although the third generation is not very strong, it is not weak either. At least they won the second war. If you want to say that there is no credit at all, it is all the Sannin and Minato. I don't believe it. After all, isn't it because you are criticizing Sandai because he is relatively weak and follows the trend?

The characters I wrote include a heroine who is a passerby, and An Yilun has not yet disappeared in more than 60 chapters, and it is a marginalized book. . .

Why are there so many typos?

After reading the first few chapters, I obviously feel that he is an honest person. Let's not talk about the content for now, but when I see a large section of text together, I have no desire to read it. I can improve it.

In my opinion, the only advantage of this novel is that there are pictures in every chapter

Chapter 5: The Poison is full of loopholes. Marriage is proposed by the protagonist. It is considered the gift of Xuan Xiao. Where did the gift of Duke Zhou come from? It is full of loopholes. The innate treasure has no offensive and defensive uses. It is an absolute joke with loopholes. It does not even have the most basic functions. It is a low-level prehistoric novel.

In Chapter 12, when it comes to taking in Xiao Ai and teaching her abilities, didn't Wang already tell Gabriel that Fenghou Qimen can do divination and that he didn't create his own problems? Now that I have seen both sides leading Gabriel and I feel comfortable talking about it, then even if I have some scruples about Thor taking care of the dragon at the beginning, there is no need to hide it after getting familiar with it. The double standard is too serious. How about revising Chapter 12? I think it would be easier to revise Chapter 12.

The characters I wrote include a heroine who is a passerby, and An Yilun has not yet disappeared in more than 60 chapters, and it is a marginalized book. . .

I hope the author can play VR games

前面写的好好的，后面直接*尾，一开始大气磅礴，后面阴谋诡计也就算了，奖励跟小孩子一样，搞笑呢？

Can you sit down? It's been a few days since you updated two chapters, and one chapter has been locked up in a dark room.

Commentary on Chapter 9: Life Experience on the First Day [Requesting Data] in "Film and Television Life: Starting from Replacing Emperor Xinghanwen" written by Wang Kaisaburo.