Wrath of the Heavens: Plane Wars

You can feel that the author wrote it very carefully, but it is still boring to read, so it is better to refine it. The protagonists are constantly having adventures, so the language must not be bland, as that would be tasteless. For example, to save the black elf, you can write like this: directly write that the black elf is chased by the slave traders, and just when he is about to be captured, the protagonist makes a brilliant appearance, and then recalls the attack magic of Niu Xi, but misses it. The protagonist also pretends to say that God has the virtue of good life, and I am no exception. In fact, the protagonist has been drained of his magic power. When the slave trader saw such a powerful magic, his imagination was so wild that he mistakenly thought he was a master, so he knelt down and ran away. Then the black elf was instantly impressed by the protagonist's bastard spirit and prostrated himself under the protagonist's pomegranate skirt, uh, no, under the battle armor. There should be surprises when setting the plot, and the language should be vivid and interesting when writing. Of course I am just making a suggestion. If you can, listen, but if you can't, just think I'm **