Appearing in front of the Golden Lion at the beginning, he became the opponent's successor?
What can Piaopiao Fruit control?
The earth, sea water, air... Even the final time and space, as long as they are touched by me, everything is under my control
I am the lord of the invisible empire, sitting in the sky
The introduction is weak, please read the text
This novel and its characters are purely fictitious. Any similarity is purely coincidental and should not be imitated.
Reader comments
I'm speechless. I didn't read Mai-senpai's swimsuit photos before because they didn't protect me from lightning. But the new book was so popular that it was said to be a big seller. Many people bought it in the countryside of Japan.
According to your settings, Whitebeard can shatter time, Aokiji can freeze time, and Kizaru can travel through time.
I just watched a video saying that the president launched 23 missiles against Japan on his first day in office, so the author... You know
The author was so happy that he actually didn't write anything. I don't know if it was a few years ago when he was so happy and solipsistic.
Although I like the plot of falling in love with the wrong person, it is not suitable to put it on the protagonist. Look at his own attribute points and see what difference Tianhei makes to the protagonist. As long as the protagonist expresses that he wants to be a scumbag, I am embarrassed to comment.
Make a crane young and take him into the harem?
I had a hunch as soon as I saw the title. I clicked in and saw that it was you. I would like to apologize in advance. I was too subjective in the last book and it caused you harm. I'm sorry. But let me clarify, I didn't really open your box. Since it is a new book, I hope you can write it well.
It started off as fiercely as a tiger, but why did it falter later on? You forcefully approach the protagonist group and go to high school without changing your clothes. Even if the winery is full of undercover agents, you still look down on the winery.
The author finally embarked on the road of Shuishu. This is serious right-wingism. Should be severely criticized. Um.
Can time touch you? Can you touch a ghost? How about an intangible object or a ball?
It's good to give money to others for no reason...
Mimikyu is a ghost-type and fairy-type Pokémon.
Don't just give me a letter of understanding. The police are also very busy. At least they know the law. The other neighbors are just mindless tools, so just don't deal with them. There are many neighbors who have never interacted with each other, especially in this environment.
Just two lines of words, sometimes Director Wang, sometimes Director Yang. When writing a novel, you should read and review the manuscript first. Don't mess around if it makes sense.
The case is well written, but it needs to be balanced with daily routines, and the protagonist should not be turned into a crime-solving machine.
The knowledge color can evolve, why not the armed color?
The passerby character always mentions something that he looks down on the protagonist, and it's not enough to mention it once, two or three times. After he looks down on him, he still has to mention "I looked down on him before." Good mindless and cool novels always like to stuff ** stuff.
The author is very efficient. He just finished writing many chapters at noon.
The author's writing style is okay. As long as it's not watery, I'll read it. It's much better than the other books.
I have read about ten chapters, and overall I can still read it. However, I don't know whether it's the author's poor word count or the writing style. It gives me the feeling that it's a lot of nonsense. It always takes a long time to return to the plot. After writing a little plot, it continues the main line with a lot of nonsense.
I would like to give you a suggestion. I wrote too much during the simulation time. I have not finished all 44 chapters now, so that not many people will read it. The subsequent simulations can be compressed a bit, mainly to write about the changes in the world line after the simulation is over.
If Yuan Shao is so awesome, he can unify the Three Kingdoms without Boss Cao behind him.
Green hair... If you don't say what the meaning of green hair on your head is, this aesthetic is unacceptable. . Donkey-headed fly?
Watching One Piece, I always feel that Luffy, Ace, and Luffy's father are not a good guy.
Did the author cut it off? He's a eunuch
Even if you imitate others, you won't even know what you are doing even though you are halfway through writing it.
You say that the way of heaven is conscious, but you still dare to talk nonsense over a woman. Awesome
Can fruit abilities be inherited?
Just out of curiosity, the author thinks he is not good at writing the introduction, but is he confident enough to write the content?
Next episode, a stone weighing 100,000 tons falls from the sky
I'm speechless. I didn't read Mai-senpai's swimsuit photos before because they didn't protect me from lightning. But the new book was so popular that it was said to be a big seller. Many people bought it in the countryside of Japan.
According to your settings, Whitebeard can shatter time, Aokiji can freeze time, and Kizaru can travel through time.
I just watched a video saying that the president launched 23 missiles against Japan on his first day in office, so the author... You know
The author was so happy that he actually didn't write anything. I don't know if it was a few years ago when he was so happy and solipsistic.
Although I like the plot of falling in love with the wrong person, it is not suitable to put it on the protagonist. Look at his own attribute points and see what difference Tianhei makes to the protagonist. As long as the protagonist expresses that he wants to be a scumbag, I am embarrassed to comment.
Make a crane young and take him into the harem?
I had a hunch as soon as I saw the title. I clicked in and saw that it was you. I would like to apologize in advance. I was too subjective in the last book and it caused you harm. I'm sorry. But let me clarify, I didn't really open your box. Since it is a new book, I hope you can write it well.
It started off as fiercely as a tiger, but why did it falter later on? You forcefully approach the protagonist group and go to high school without changing your clothes. Even if the winery is full of undercover agents, you still look down on the winery.
The author finally embarked on the road of Shuishu. This is serious right-wingism. Should be severely criticized. Um.
Can time touch you? Can you touch a ghost? How about an intangible object or a ball?
It's good to give money to others for no reason...
Mimikyu is a ghost-type and fairy-type Pokémon.
Don't just give me a letter of understanding. The police are also very busy. At least they know the law. The other neighbors are just mindless tools, so just don't deal with them. There are many neighbors who have never interacted with each other, especially in this environment.
Just two lines of words, sometimes Director Wang, sometimes Director Yang. When writing a novel, you should read and review the manuscript first. Don't mess around if it makes sense.
The case is well written, but it needs to be balanced with daily routines, and the protagonist should not be turned into a crime-solving machine.
The knowledge color can evolve, why not the armed color?
The passerby character always mentions something that he looks down on the protagonist, and it's not enough to mention it once, two or three times. After he looks down on him, he still has to mention "I looked down on him before." Good mindless and cool novels always like to stuff ** stuff.
The author is very efficient. He just finished writing many chapters at noon.
The author's writing style is okay. As long as it's not watery, I'll read it. It's much better than the other books.
I have read about ten chapters, and overall I can still read it. However, I don't know whether it's the author's poor word count or the writing style. It gives me the feeling that it's a lot of nonsense. It always takes a long time to return to the plot. After writing a little plot, it continues the main line with a lot of nonsense.
I would like to give you a suggestion. I wrote too much during the simulation time. I have not finished all 44 chapters now, so that not many people will read it. The subsequent simulations can be compressed a bit, mainly to write about the changes in the world line after the simulation is over.
If Yuan Shao is so awesome, he can unify the Three Kingdoms without Boss Cao behind him.
Green hair... If you don't say what the meaning of green hair on your head is, this aesthetic is unacceptable. . Donkey-headed fly?
Watching One Piece, I always feel that Luffy, Ace, and Luffy's father are not a good guy.
Did the author cut it off? He's a eunuch
Even if you imitate others, you won't even know what you are doing even though you are halfway through writing it.
You say that the way of heaven is conscious, but you still dare to talk nonsense over a woman. Awesome
Can fruit abilities be inherited?
Just out of curiosity, the author thinks he is not good at writing the introduction, but is he confident enough to write the content?
Next episode, a stone weighing 100,000 tons falls from the sky