I Rob Tombs with the Sharingan

You already have the Sharingan, but you still go robbing tombs? Go to a bar and bet with some rich second-generation people. If you have a magic eye, you can become a millionaire in one night!

Does it mean that if Big Jinya wants to kill you, you should let him go?

How to say it? It's always me, me, it's a little annoying to look at

Direct introduction**, if you have supercilious looks, isn't it good to gamble on stones?

I mainly give the author a suggestion. Your writing is so messy. It will be in the first person for a while. It's in third person for a while, and some of the punctuation marks are wrong. It really makes my brain hurt to watch it

Author, stop using the first person, it's awkward

This is my first time writing a novel. If it's not good, everyone can judge. But I really don't want to attack you personally. I'm slowly learning.

Why is your first person pronoun so awkward?

Dear readers, please rest assured

I knew the book review section was full of complaints. .