The Sharpest Tongue in One Piece History

If the protagonist wants to live well in the world of pirates, then he knows that he should improve his strength like crazy, but the protagonist is worried and muddles along. This is too arguable. He was also messy during training, which is suitable for physical skills. But at the beginning, he insisted on practicing swordsmanship and didn't practice seriously. More than thirty years of life experience in the past and present life lead to living like this? ―No life plan, nothing to do. Another mentally retarded protagonist! Even writing about an ordinary person would be better than this. There is no such thing in reality. Anyway, I haven't seen it in more than 20 years. Of course, I have only read a dozen chapters. If the protagonist improves later, it will be a good book. Otherwise, I think it is just a *book because there is no sense of substitution. Who would put themselves into the perspective of an imbecile?

I remember Luffy didn't just rely on plug-ins? People have slogans but also actions, okay? And Luffy put in as much effort as anyone else? Why do you always mock others in a weird way?

For example: The Fifth Emperor Luffy was knocked unconscious by a stick, but he could go back and forth when fighting a general, even though he would definitely lose. : There is also Mingge who dares to be arrogant with Qingzhi but not with Kaido. There are many more examples that I won't write down. The conclusion is that the four emperors are stronger than the generals.

Why don't we take in the Empress and Robin?

I can't stand it when I keep saying that Roger's group is a good person and kind-hearted person! Pirates are pirates. Didn't they say that Roger valued his partners, but he did things that destroyed the country when his partners were scolded?

A golden lion was found eight hundred miles away. This is really powerful.

The four emperors, the marshals and the five old stars are all younger brothers in front of me. Believe it or not, I can make them disappear from my eyes with just one finger.

The mosasaur fruit that the second brother ate? Isn't that a mosasaur that can't go into the water for nothing?

This One Piece fanfic is well written, and it's the only one I've finished reading.

The protagonist is almost forty and his wife is not young either. She should have three children. I hope the protagonist can get the vampire fruit for his son.