Travel back to the time of Naruto's World War II and awaken the Seven Swords System.
Every time you get a sword, you get a powerful ability.
The ice and snow, sword energy flying...
Xiaonan: I was lucky to be rescued by Brother Youmu at that time.
Terumi Mei: Yumu? Thank him very much.
Sarutobi Hiruzen: Hey, it would be great if he was willing to become a Konoha man.
...
Xigyouji Youmu, a person who lives outside the five great ninja villages, but leaves them all helpless.
This novel and its characters are purely fictitious. Any similarity is purely coincidental and should not be imitated.
Reader comments
Zhu Biao is irreplaceable in Lao Zhu's heart. Don't think that if you can bring Ming Dynasty to a better place, Lao Zhu will make you the prince.
He will only think that you should be a good king who is doing nothing for his elder brother. If you are too strong, then even your son can be abolished or even killed. Although your things are good, if the world is not Zhu Biao's, what's the point?
It can be seen from the fact that he would rather give the throne to Zhu Yunwen than to Zhu Di. He has never thought about the problems of a weak king and a strong minister, a weak king and a strong mother.
He couldn't have imagined that those sons would rebel if they refused. This also proved that the reason why he was not worried about Zhu Yunwen being ignored was that if the meat could rot, it would rot in the pot.
But even so, I didn't want to give it to Zhu Di, who could inherit the throne at that time.
The more we know about Zhu Yuanzhang, the emperor, the more we feel that he is far inferior to Zhu Di as emperor.
Various Naruto stories, especially Naruto who traveled through time,
Hinata always fell in love with the time traveler, and even stayed with him until death, just like in the original novel.
In fact, this is very unreasonable.
The reason why Hinata likes Naruto is not only because he is a hero who saves beauty, but more importantly
Naruto's confident, optimistic and sunny attitude, for Hinata who has low self-esteem,
As bright as the sun,
Just because the hero saves the beauty, plus long-term training, maybe she will like it too
But it is difficult to achieve the original feelings towards Naruto
If it's just a hero saving the beauty, haven't others saved her?
At least not the two people on her team? And Neji
They all died because of her
Is there a multiverse in the Star Dome Railway worldview? Is it multiverse at most?
Written in a mess, the top ten peerless goddesses. Author, do you have any misunderstandings about the word peerless? Peerless is not only a representative of beauty but also strength, and Xiao Wu is also worthy of it.
又是长乐,长乐=公交车
Having said that. There is a small garden in this manga world. How did the gods and demons in Devil's High School survive? I remember that the gods and demons in the small garden seemed to be big fish eating small fish. Conquer fellows from other worlds. God has only one spiritual personality, there cannot be two, and the same goes for other gods and demons. If you say that a four-digit number cannot cross the world, forget it. I don't believe that even a three-digit number or more can't cross the world and gather peers. After all, it can improve strength.
Xu Qin and Song Yan had a relationship in high school, how did the author handle it?
Xuse doesn't sound good. I remember a certain hero seemed to be called Jingse
Why should Super Five be regarded as strength? Isn't it true that the stronger the normal state, the stronger the transformation?
It feels so heavy right now
Is the protagonist too cowardly? The Raikage Tsuchikage planned to ambush you, but you let it go easily... Danzo plotted against you first, and then plotted to kill your brother-in-law, but you still didn't kill him... Then what are the uses of your invincible strength! Maybe the protagonist feels that he is invincible so he doesn't care about assassinations, but can you guarantee that no one around you will be assassinated? Knowing that Danzo's existence poses a huge threat to the people around him and not dealing with it, author, are you just riding a horse with sand dollars? Or a coward without eggs?
Good brothers come back for a resurrection match
When I saw Terumi Mei and Konan appearing as Sarutobi Hiruzen in the introduction, I didn't want to read it.
I didn't feel much about it when I read it myself. I don't know how other readers felt. Anyway, my mind was in a mess when I read it. I really didn't understand it, especially the last paragraph of one chapter: Wang Lin's classmate in No. 1 Middle School, what the hell. The subject matter is quite good, but the author must be a novice. Some paragraphs that should not be written are awkwardly included, such as the paragraph about how many souls were confiscated due to empty cards after the protagonist came out of the secret realm. Why did you add a paragraph about the soul beast later? It looks very embarrassing, okay?
The plot at the beginning was well written and not embarrassing at all, but it became a trap after becoming a disciple of Jiraiya. The Third Hokage also knew that the protagonist had developed an unprecedented blood inheritance limit based on the family's secret technique. Under such circumstances, the second day after becoming a disciple of Jiraiya, the protagonist, a child under nine years old, was asked to graduate from school and go to the battlefield? The Akimichi clan actually agreed? Not to mention that the protagonist has strong recovery power, all they know is that the protagonist has strong recovery ability after transformation, and the blood inheritance limit has just been developed, and he is not even familiar with it yet. In this case, even I, a reader, feel that the Third Generation and Jiraiya do not want the Akimichi clan to pass on this blood inheritance, so they must quickly send the protagonist to the battlefield and kill him as cannon fodder.
It's a very good book. Why is it a eunuch?
Chapter 1: Does it mean to turn the earth into a world of immortality? The earth, universe, and heaven are so boring that they can control everything in the universe by turning the earth into a technological world?
He's also a little kid, so he has to redeem the system, and he'll be rewarded with the basic fire control skill at the beginning. After that, he was participating in a business performance and wanted to perform a magic trick. (The one he reported before was fire magic.) He invited someone to come on stage. At first, there was a flame in his palm. Later, the fireball became bigger and he promoted the girl. The girl was covered in fire. Then, when she screamed in shock, the fire turned into two wings and moved on the girl's back. Because of this incident, the protagonist became famous overnight and received an invitation to participate in this survival variety show. If he were not the protagonist, he would not be able to participate. He is not qualified, and the people who invite him are first- and second-tier stars.
Isn't it only more than ten years? Why is it only decades?
The future fourth-generation Raikage is called Ai, and the puppet master and his wife are Scorpion's parents.
Isn't the third Mizukage Yagura? I remember the third Mizukage was a jinchuriki, right?
In the third chapter, I vomited when I saw the protagonist in a daze. The protagonist in an urban novel is in a daze when he sees a beautiful woman or something. It's okay, he's safe! You are sitting on the battlefield in a daze, do you really not regard us as human beings?
Very good, keep writing and update more
I either copied or took classes from Zhi Fei Lu's books.
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Zhu Biao is irreplaceable in Lao Zhu's heart. Don't think that if you can bring Ming Dynasty to a better place, Lao Zhu will make you the prince. He will only think that you should be a good king who is doing nothing for his elder brother. If you are too strong, then even your son can be abolished or even killed. Although your things are good, if the world is not Zhu Biao's, what's the point? It can be seen from the fact that he would rather give the throne to Zhu Yunwen than to Zhu Di. He has never thought about the problems of a weak king and a strong minister, a weak king and a strong mother. He couldn't have imagined that those sons would rebel if they refused. This also proved that the reason why he was not worried about Zhu Yunwen being ignored was that if the meat could rot, it would rot in the pot. But even so, I didn't want to give it to Zhu Di, who could inherit the throne at that time. The more we know about Zhu Yuanzhang, the emperor, the more we feel that he is far inferior to Zhu Di as emperor.
Various Naruto stories, especially Naruto who traveled through time, Hinata always fell in love with the time traveler, and even stayed with him until death, just like in the original novel. In fact, this is very unreasonable. The reason why Hinata likes Naruto is not only because he is a hero who saves beauty, but more importantly Naruto's confident, optimistic and sunny attitude, for Hinata who has low self-esteem, As bright as the sun, Just because the hero saves the beauty, plus long-term training, maybe she will like it too But it is difficult to achieve the original feelings towards Naruto If it's just a hero saving the beauty, haven't others saved her? At least not the two people on her team? And Neji They all died because of her
Is there a multiverse in the Star Dome Railway worldview? Is it multiverse at most?
Written in a mess, the top ten peerless goddesses. Author, do you have any misunderstandings about the word peerless? Peerless is not only a representative of beauty but also strength, and Xiao Wu is also worthy of it.
又是长乐,长乐=公交车
Having said that. There is a small garden in this manga world. How did the gods and demons in Devil's High School survive? I remember that the gods and demons in the small garden seemed to be big fish eating small fish. Conquer fellows from other worlds. God has only one spiritual personality, there cannot be two, and the same goes for other gods and demons. If you say that a four-digit number cannot cross the world, forget it. I don't believe that even a three-digit number or more can't cross the world and gather peers. After all, it can improve strength.
Xu Qin and Song Yan had a relationship in high school, how did the author handle it?
Xuse doesn't sound good. I remember a certain hero seemed to be called Jingse
Why should Super Five be regarded as strength? Isn't it true that the stronger the normal state, the stronger the transformation?
It feels so heavy right now
Is the protagonist too cowardly? The Raikage Tsuchikage planned to ambush you, but you let it go easily... Danzo plotted against you first, and then plotted to kill your brother-in-law, but you still didn't kill him... Then what are the uses of your invincible strength! Maybe the protagonist feels that he is invincible so he doesn't care about assassinations, but can you guarantee that no one around you will be assassinated? Knowing that Danzo's existence poses a huge threat to the people around him and not dealing with it, author, are you just riding a horse with sand dollars? Or a coward without eggs?
Good brothers come back for a resurrection match
When I saw Terumi Mei and Konan appearing as Sarutobi Hiruzen in the introduction, I didn't want to read it.
I didn't feel much about it when I read it myself. I don't know how other readers felt. Anyway, my mind was in a mess when I read it. I really didn't understand it, especially the last paragraph of one chapter: Wang Lin's classmate in No. 1 Middle School, what the hell. The subject matter is quite good, but the author must be a novice. Some paragraphs that should not be written are awkwardly included, such as the paragraph about how many souls were confiscated due to empty cards after the protagonist came out of the secret realm. Why did you add a paragraph about the soul beast later? It looks very embarrassing, okay?
The plot at the beginning was well written and not embarrassing at all, but it became a trap after becoming a disciple of Jiraiya. The Third Hokage also knew that the protagonist had developed an unprecedented blood inheritance limit based on the family's secret technique. Under such circumstances, the second day after becoming a disciple of Jiraiya, the protagonist, a child under nine years old, was asked to graduate from school and go to the battlefield? The Akimichi clan actually agreed? Not to mention that the protagonist has strong recovery power, all they know is that the protagonist has strong recovery ability after transformation, and the blood inheritance limit has just been developed, and he is not even familiar with it yet. In this case, even I, a reader, feel that the Third Generation and Jiraiya do not want the Akimichi clan to pass on this blood inheritance, so they must quickly send the protagonist to the battlefield and kill him as cannon fodder.
It's a very good book. Why is it a eunuch?
Chapter 1: Does it mean to turn the earth into a world of immortality? The earth, universe, and heaven are so boring that they can control everything in the universe by turning the earth into a technological world?
He's also a little kid, so he has to redeem the system, and he'll be rewarded with the basic fire control skill at the beginning. After that, he was participating in a business performance and wanted to perform a magic trick. (The one he reported before was fire magic.) He invited someone to come on stage. At first, there was a flame in his palm. Later, the fireball became bigger and he promoted the girl. The girl was covered in fire. Then, when she screamed in shock, the fire turned into two wings and moved on the girl's back. Because of this incident, the protagonist became famous overnight and received an invitation to participate in this survival variety show. If he were not the protagonist, he would not be able to participate. He is not qualified, and the people who invite him are first- and second-tier stars.
Isn't it only more than ten years? Why is it only decades?
The future fourth-generation Raikage is called Ai, and the puppet master and his wife are Scorpion's parents.
Isn't the third Mizukage Yagura? I remember the third Mizukage was a jinchuriki, right?
In the third chapter, I vomited when I saw the protagonist in a daze. The protagonist in an urban novel is in a daze when he sees a beautiful woman or something. It's okay, he's safe! You are sitting on the battlefield in a daze, do you really not regard us as human beings?
Very good, keep writing and update more
I either copied or took classes from Zhi Fei Lu's books.
Comments on Chapter 14 of "Martial Arts: The Imperial Concubine's Personal Fake Eunuch" written by Wuxia No. 1. Self-created bloodthirsty magic skills (please pray for flowers recommendation votes!)).
About Chapter 160 of "Let You Paint Hot Blood, You Don't Paint Bilian Zhang Chulan" written by Dong Jiagongzi: Zuo Ruotong: Zhang Zhiwei, do you still want to compete with me? Chapter review.
About "Da Ming: Lao Zhu peeked at my diary and his mentality collapsed" written by 1 on horseback and holding a gun 029 You dare to use your father to oppress me, you boy are waiting alone to comment on the chapter.
About Dongmen Rascal's "Ancient Desolation: Man is in Heaven, Beitian Gate God!" 234 Cultivation of immortality and Taoism, cultivation of Taoism and truth! (Please subscribe and reward in full) Chapter review.
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About Kao Ying's book "In Konoha, wood escape breaks out at the beginning!" Chapter 73 You will be afraid when you hear his name! (3,000-Word chapter, please subscribe for 9k/8k when it is released) Chapter review.