
Tennis: One Step Ahead
网球:快人一步
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 1.1M Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Audience
- For men
- Updated
- 4y ago
- Source
- Faloo
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10.0 · 21kScore
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I don't know when it started. Net King fanfics can no longer have female protagonists. Then the writing style of Net King fanfics is generally much better than other genres, but in the end they all end up being eunuchs. Is this what you want? Author. No matter how exciting the competition is, you will get tired of it if the whole story is a competition. Even Journey to the West, which has nothing to do with emotional scenes among the four famous classics, will have plots such as Pansi Cave Daughter's Kingdom to spice up the flavor, not to mention a two-dimensional fanfiction? I hope your book will stick, although I don't have any hope
If you are not robbing, you are on the way to rob, if you are not killing, you are on the way to kill. What do you want to do? This is not how Shuangwen is written.
Life is full of hatred, water is always the east, I'm so crazy about it!
Compared with the previous few books, I was really caught off guard. I have always been recruiting girls and suddenly I am writing without female protagonists. I will wait for your next new book...
It's boring to see people practicing hurdles. He also gave Liu Feiren a makeover. Look at it!
Forgetting the last book Eunuch, why did this one only have four chapters? No more updates? The subject matter is obviously quite interesting.
If you are not afraid of style inconsistency, there are many beauties in Arale's Penguin Village, including Akane and her three sisters, mother and daughter Kaikaru, Midori Yamabuki, policewoman, etc., But they are all painted in the style of Akira Toriyama, with similar differences, and their IQs... There is also a crazy idea, which is to set up a race of mermaid beauties, all of which are beauties with upper bodies and fish tails in the lower body, and can transform into humans. They can all be transformed and used as a maid bodyguard team, and in this way, the number will also increase. It is estimated that they will be able to break through to the second level before the Piccolo Demon King arc.
The author wishes everyone happiness.
Why should we imitate Xu F and give a grave to Germany? Since the plot was changed so that Duke would not betray, why should we still follow the original story? What's even more stupid is to ask Tezuka for treatment in advance. Do you really think that Japan's U17 is invincible? In the original work, both sides suffered losses.
There won't be any red blood cells, right?
I feel like the protagonist also needs to have a pet, just like Ryoma has a cat.
The World Championship is a best-of-three-game system, right?
The Thirty-Six Methods of Tiangang: mediating nature, reversing Yin and Yang, moving stars to fight, returning to heaven and sun, calling for wind and rain, shaking mountains and earth, driving fog and clouds, drawing rivers into shape, spreading golden light on the ground, turning rivers and seas, pointing the ground into steel, five elements escape, six armors and strange doors, knowing the future against the will, whipping mountains and moving rocks, bringing the dead back to life, flying to leave traces, nine Breathe the Qi, draw out the Yuanyang, subdue the dragon and subdue the tiger, mend the sky and bathe in the sun, push the mountains and fill the sea, turn the stone into gold, stand upright without a shadow, change the shape of the fetus, make the size as desired, the flower blooms instantly, wander the spirit to control the Qi, see through the wall, return the wind and return the fire, master the five thunders, dive into the abyss and shrink the earth, fly sand and stones, hold the mountain and cross the sea, scatter beans into soldiers, nail the seven arrows
Why are they all descriptions of competitions, and they all have nothing to do with the protagonist. I can only write a few pictures of the competitions of the supporting characters in the original book. It's so boring.
It's a bit confusing to watch! It doesn't matter if the protagonist is a spectator!
The author got one thing wrong. Long Ya wants to win the opponent before he can devour the opponent's ability, and it is uncontrollable.
The author can select a few games of the game between the main characters and write them in detail, instead of constantly adding up the score after each other's skills. The game process depends entirely on the reader's imagination. The unimportant characters are mentioned in one stroke, and a few games are briefly explained. There is no need to write in such detail. Not many people want to read them. The original work has them, so there is no need to overstate the word count.
It's a bit like a male channel's female channel.
The protagonist's sense of presence is too low, it feels like he's just watching others play the game
The main character has too few roles, so I'll just skip this early stage.
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I remember Marui is Jirou's idol, right?
There are really too many books about Qing Bing Li Bu. One or two books are okay, but I feel a little tired after reading too many. It's not that it doesn't look good, it's just aesthetic fatigue.
U17 can write so many chapters for a doubles match against Germany?
Will Duke join Team Japan?
The big yellow insect armor is so ugly.
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