Urban: Blind Dates Make Me Stronger

First, you are a female author and you write harem stories that boys can read. The first problem is that boys will not be satisfied with ambiguity. What boys consider is whether they can have sex. Second, the supporting male characters appearing in the article are all too good-looking, basically surpassing the protagonist. Thirdly, the male protagonist has a lot of poisonous past, and you like to be ambiguous too much. Fourth, the power system is too chaotic, so there should be no fantasy. At most qigong and the like will be enough. When we men watch the city, we pay more attention to the emotional line, and secondly whether it is enjoyable or not. Who cares whether the protagonist really wants to fight for hegemony? Just slap the supporting character twice in the face. At most, dig a corner and don't make any mess. Fifth, there were too many female characters at the beginning, and the writing was a bit messy.

A capable girl would still go on a blind date??

I suggest the author not to introduce too many new female characters. Too many characters will be confusing. It's not easy to meet a female writer writing a male video. We will definitely protect you. Write well and come on.

Isn't it about blind dates? Why is it written that he is a scumbag?

? Why can't I get involved with other girls after a successful blind date?

I suggest the author change the outline first, otherwise it will collapse based on the current situation.

Coaxing children is like going to a ring. You think the children next to you can't hear you, but you still think they are fools. Don't compare the innocence of children to mental retardation.

Miss author, based on my 5-year experience as a bookworm, I would like to remind you not to have too many harems. 2 Or 3 is the limit. It is best to have a single heroine. If you have no inspiration, just write about daily life!

Ah Feng... I'm not from Guangdong and I don't have a sense of belonging.

The beauty's name is not very pleasant. . . Scrawled