Xianxia: Bound to a System from the Start

When writing a novel, don't follow the plot. Follow the plot. Why did I read your book? I won't read the original work.

Know the plot but don't do licking*, there is a difference between cultivating immortals and being diaosi Only represents personal opinion

Author, let me correct you. Leader Tongtian is good at formations rather than weapon refining, while Yu Qing Yuan is good at weapon refining.

In fact, I personally think that Shushan and Qionghua are actually similar. Qionghua is actually more famous and powerful as long as he does not fall. However, what I set here is that Shushan is very similar to the Lingjian Mountain in the anime Once Upon a Time. It is a sect with deep foundation but a low profile.

The Shushan Party is much weaker than the Qionghua Party in Fairy Sword. I don't accept your claim that Shushan is number one.

The upper part is not correct, the lower part is wrong, the writing style needs to be improved, I hope it can be corrected

Pig's feet licking? What kind of scumbag goddess? Is it cheap? Are you still licking if you have a system?

Chapter 1, a blue outfit with Yunxiang Talisman and bat pattern. What is a cool outfit? I don't quite understand

There is no sense of immersion at all. . . . . . Writing skills need to be improved

My first reaction when I saw the introduction was that the protagonist is called Murong Zicai? Murong bruised?