The Invincible Strongman Woke Up

The writing is very childish. Does it take a punch from the head of the Ye family to determine the corresponding level of cultivation? Can't it be known with just a sweep of spiritual consciousness?

The author created a new genre of novels: mentally retarded flow

The characterization of the protagonist is not good!

1. Cultivation of immortality does not require skills. Everyone can practice however they want and actually succeed. 2. They always say that other authors are just mortals, diao, who only know YY. In short, everything other authors write in their novels is their own YY, and only what they write is true. 3. Always teasing others to defeat the protagonist, stepping on others and praising themselves

It's okay, but I don't understand the issue of strength.

I'm watching to get fatter. Come on, author^0^~

Now that I have learned a lot, you don't need any techniques to cultivate immortality. You can do whatever you want to do. Other novel authors are just ordinary people who only know YY. Have you ever woken up and considered yourself the protagonist of your novel?

My name is pronounced Chi (three sounds of chi)

Let's make a cover first and then write.

Commentary on Chapter 2: The Realm of Cultivation written by Xiao Diandai, "The Invincible Strong Man Wakes Up."