
Naruto: Starting Out in Kumogakure
火影:从云隐村开局
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 135k Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 4y ago
- Source
- Faloo
Synopsis
All-time: Reads, Flowers.
101Chapters
2.2MReads
14.5kFlowers
10.0Score
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At his peak, Hyuga Hizashi was only a jounin, and he could still beat the Eight-Tails? Still sealing the hole? The author of Yun Hokage? Are you afraid that you don't know that Hyuga Neji sealed Naruto? Then the tailed beast chakra was released immediately. What you wrote is really interesting. Did the Hokage jump to read it?
What rubbish, Yao was fucked by Hizashi, are you fucking kidding me! Hinata can fight against the Jinchuuriki, so what's the matter with Uchiha and the Yondaime?
Konoha, Kumogakure, Kazugakure, and Kirigakure have all been written about. Poor Tsuchigakure, no protagonist has ever visited it.
It's boring. There are a bunch of messed up abilities. It's so confusing. And the weapon is a hammer. So let's look at a hammer. I'd like to give you a suggestion, either add three colors of Haki and a powerful swordsman, or add a immortal body and reincarnation. You don't need too many abilities, just a few high-end and practical ones.
Finally someone wrote about the Raikage, the others are starting with Kirigakure Village, or Konoha Village. There is another village. It's a village that doesn't have the beginning of Kumogakure. The taste of philosophy is true love.
Suddenly I realized that I had only watched a few episodes of the Naruto anime and One Piece, but I had never watched it. Why did I suddenly become obsessed with Naruto and One Piece fans for a period of time? The key point is that now I know a lot about the plot and characters. I can find something wrong when I read novels. How can I be considered a fan of Naruto and One Piece?
Although it is not the original version of Hot Wheels, its aerial speed should be second to none in the ninja world that lacks flying skills. This thing is a flying magic weapon after all. Although it has not been shown in the movie, but there is a sequel, it can at least catch up with Soaring Clouds and Mist. Otherwise, how can we fight with gods? And although it is not the official version of God, Soaring Clouds and Mist is the way for gods to rush on their way. It cannot be unreasonable. It is not too much to set it as the best in the ninja world with air speed. And it can keep flying, not the short burst of speed like the teleportation technique.
Aren't the people in Raikage Village all muscular men? What do you mean by this little feeling?
Author, why did you give the protagonist Kidou? The opening and closing of the Lei Ninja Village is quite beautiful. It's better to use Thunder Dragon Slayer Magic. Isn't he cool when he swallows thunder and lightning? Isn't he cool with the iron fist of the thunder dragon? Isn't he cool with the roar of the thunder dragon? Doesn't he enjoy the secret of dragon slaying?
Why does it always say "Golden Palace"?