Online Game: One Hundred Times the Loot Drops

If you have any suggestions, please point them out here. If you have any mistakes, please tell me. Because this is my first time writing, I have overlooked a lot of things and have many shortcomings. As long as you don't have bad breath, all comments will not be deleted. Please give me some advice! It will be modified!

I can apply the skill of writing this to a novel, but I'm afraid no one will read it.

After reading dozens of chapters, if you are a woman, you are awesome or you are friends with the protagonist in the previous life, but if you are a man, you are a scum**, or you will be killed by the protagonist casually, and no matter what race the protagonist recruits, they are all female.

Author, how many women do you want to write about? I'm almost convinced. Do you want the male protagonist to have a harem?

The protagonist's race is. . . Primitive?

It is the only type of soldier that can only be recruited by contracted elf goddesses. The protagonist has never said what level of troops it is. It is the only type of soldier that has bullied low-priced troops and is the only one that can be returned to the goddess.

I don't mean to target anyone, I just want to complain ┐('~`;)┌. I feel that if the author of Feilu Code Words was known by his primary school teachers, eight out of ten would cry (?;;`). Anyone who has passed mathematics knows that one time is multiplied by two, and a hundred times should be the base multiplied by one hundred and one...

Can it explode a hundred times more? Can it explode a hundred times more? Can it explode a hundred times more? Can it explode a hundred times more? Can it explode a hundred times more? Can it explode a hundred times more?

1. The full-text data is too confusing! 2. There is no description of the map at all and no sense of immersion! 3. There are too many mistakes. I hope the author will be more serious when writing. He is always recruiting other troops and sending different troops. It is very strange! 4. The combat power system is confusing. It feels like the author wants to refer to the previous system but also wants to add his own things, which makes it a bit different! 5. Logical problem. Not to mention that the protagonist is addicted to food and drink like Revenge. It seems problematic to expose his own situation since he knows that he will announce his integration into the real world in half a year. 6. When the author writes a book on the website, please find out about the readers' hobbies. The female protagonist** still holds back in front of the male protagonist. I have nothing to say! Above

Is there anyone out there who has watched the latest chapter like me? I don't want to be alone