Traveling across the heavens, starting with Naruto.
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Reader comments
Chakra still consumes vitality, and it cannot live forever. Once a warrior's early weakness is broken through, will it have a lifespan of two to three hundred years? Chakra seeds are originally leeks scattered by the Immortal of Six Paths.
This cover is kind of cute
There's too much nonsense, I'm speechless, who's going to read so much analysis?
There are so many gods in the main world of Naruto? There are also various studies on luck and the world, which seem to be very capable. If the level is not high, the writing should be simple. It is a mess after pulling out so many things.
To be honest, there is too much nonsense written. We are here to read the refreshing articles, not the psychological descriptions.
See Chapter 123. What about the plot? The exercises take up too much. If you write these and you are not really capable of practicing, who would be in the mood to keep reading?
It might be more appropriate to change the title of the book to "Introduction to Exercises"
The introduction of water character can be better than a history book
作者你在搞笑？选二？
This is an explanatory novel, and the full text has almost no sense of substitution.
Self-pleasure? It was long and verbose, and it took me a long time to explain, but I had no desire to read any more. . .
What a shame, Zhang Sanfeng, who is at full level, is still only at the level of a Naruto genin. .
There's so much nonsense, Tsunade? Tsunade is so talented that her younger brother will die in World War II, but if she doesn't work hard to practice, then she will die as a man? If you really have such a good talent, you should have worked hard to cultivate after the death of your younger brother.
If you want to write like this again, tell me, no one has read it, it's too *writting, you have nothing to write to introduce such a crappy skill, what's the use, after that game, I didn't have more than 100 dialogues, so who wants to read the introduction to the interpretation skill?
Good setting, too much nonsense
Wash it first, and the more you choose later, the better. **, You guys are kind enough to introduce other people. You can describe your skills well. Just give it a name. Everyone knows the general meaning. Everyone understands. There are so many sisters like you, so you have to use every word. Are you afraid?
Can you write the text? This number of words is still rambling
There are too many typos and the protagonist's name keeps changing, which affects the reading experience.
Why is the protagonist's name sometimes called Wu Changkong and sometimes called Gong Chang Riyue?
There are very few dialogues in this chapter. Most of them are about the foreshadowing, the background, and the inner thoughts. There is no sense of immersion at all, and it is boring to watch.
How much money has the protagonist made for Konoha, how much has he developed and cultivated, how much has he received, and how much has he received despite being tempted by all kinds of things and not knowing how to fight back?
This author's brain is so fucking stupid. He wrote something wrong. Natural energy has no chakra. It's awesome. This is the legendary stick to kill everyone. I'm the best.
Hinata's acupuncture only prevents the flow of chakra like the sealing technique. It cannot immobilize people like martial arts' acupoints. The function of martial arts' acupoints is greatly improved, and it is not Hinata's half-hearted acupoints.
Not bad, I don't know why so many people complain about it
, I can't hold on anymore. I really can't accept this purely explanatory style. It's more verbose than Tang Seng.
Compared to Sasuke, I think the one time Naruto cheated was when the Sage of Six Paths sent the power of six paths. As the son of Shinai and Minato, it is impossible for Naruto not to inherit their talents, and he is also the reincarnation of Asura. If there is no Kyuubi, I think he can do the Wood Release. On the contrary, Sasuke, the old man helped open the eyes at the beginning, Kakashi taught the Chidori, the Sharingan rose to the Mangekyou to Eternity, and finally the Magatama Samsara Eye. In this comparison, Naruto is completely on his own.
You can travel through time and still be a sage. Why don't you be a pig?
Become a eunuch! More Nayue Bu**
Why are you bringing people from other worlds back? After they are full and full, they are still people who have not recognized their master.
There is too much nonsense, I feel like I am cheating, I write too slowly and too carefully.
Chakra still consumes vitality, and it cannot live forever. Once a warrior's early weakness is broken through, will it have a lifespan of two to three hundred years? Chakra seeds are originally leeks scattered by the Immortal of Six Paths.
This cover is kind of cute
There's too much nonsense, I'm speechless, who's going to read so much analysis?
There are so many gods in the main world of Naruto? There are also various studies on luck and the world, which seem to be very capable. If the level is not high, the writing should be simple. It is a mess after pulling out so many things.
To be honest, there is too much nonsense written. We are here to read the refreshing articles, not the psychological descriptions.
See Chapter 123. What about the plot? The exercises take up too much. If you write these and you are not really capable of practicing, who would be in the mood to keep reading?
It might be more appropriate to change the title of the book to "Introduction to Exercises"
The introduction of water character can be better than a history book
作者你在搞笑？选二？
This is an explanatory novel, and the full text has almost no sense of substitution.
Self-pleasure? It was long and verbose, and it took me a long time to explain, but I had no desire to read any more. . .
What a shame, Zhang Sanfeng, who is at full level, is still only at the level of a Naruto genin. .
There's so much nonsense, Tsunade? Tsunade is so talented that her younger brother will die in World War II, but if she doesn't work hard to practice, then she will die as a man? If you really have such a good talent, you should have worked hard to cultivate after the death of your younger brother.
If you want to write like this again, tell me, no one has read it, it's too *writting, you have nothing to write to introduce such a crappy skill, what's the use, after that game, I didn't have more than 100 dialogues, so who wants to read the introduction to the interpretation skill?
Good setting, too much nonsense
Wash it first, and the more you choose later, the better. **, You guys are kind enough to introduce other people. You can describe your skills well. Just give it a name. Everyone knows the general meaning. Everyone understands. There are so many sisters like you, so you have to use every word. Are you afraid?
Can you write the text? This number of words is still rambling
There are too many typos and the protagonist's name keeps changing, which affects the reading experience.
Why is the protagonist's name sometimes called Wu Changkong and sometimes called Gong Chang Riyue?
There are very few dialogues in this chapter. Most of them are about the foreshadowing, the background, and the inner thoughts. There is no sense of immersion at all, and it is boring to watch.
How much money has the protagonist made for Konoha, how much has he developed and cultivated, how much has he received, and how much has he received despite being tempted by all kinds of things and not knowing how to fight back?
This author's brain is so fucking stupid. He wrote something wrong. Natural energy has no chakra. It's awesome. This is the legendary stick to kill everyone. I'm the best.
Hinata's acupuncture only prevents the flow of chakra like the sealing technique. It cannot immobilize people like martial arts' acupoints. The function of martial arts' acupoints is greatly improved, and it is not Hinata's half-hearted acupoints.
Not bad, I don't know why so many people complain about it
, I can't hold on anymore. I really can't accept this purely explanatory style. It's more verbose than Tang Seng.
Compared to Sasuke, I think the one time Naruto cheated was when the Sage of Six Paths sent the power of six paths. As the son of Shinai and Minato, it is impossible for Naruto not to inherit their talents, and he is also the reincarnation of Asura. If there is no Kyuubi, I think he can do the Wood Release. On the contrary, Sasuke, the old man helped open the eyes at the beginning, Kakashi taught the Chidori, the Sharingan rose to the Mangekyou to Eternity, and finally the Magatama Samsara Eye. In this comparison, Naruto is completely on his own.
You can travel through time and still be a sage. Why don't you be a pig?
Become a eunuch! More Nayue Bu**
Why are you bringing people from other worlds back? After they are full and full, they are still people who have not recognized their master.
There is too much nonsense, I feel like I am cheating, I write too slowly and too carefully.