I descend upon the Myriad Worlds as a BOSS.
Knowledge is power, and technology is theology.
Viral infection, cellular modification, genetic engineering: become a god through science!
Transcendent energy, the foundation of cultivation, the end of sorcery: at last, myth comes into view!
The laws of the universe, the unity of all things, the highest truth, omniscience and omnipotence!
The road to eternity is long and treacherous.
The forbidden realm of omniscience and omnipotence is mysterious and wondrous.
I have no regrets, even in death!
This novel and its characters are entirely fictional. Any resemblance to real people or events is purely coincidental. Do not imitate.
The first two chapters are good. I hope to open up my imagination a little more and let the protagonist have all the great power. He is invincible in the world. He must choose the best and not have a few naive female protagonists. Since it is a boss theme, he must be cold-blooded and ruthless. He can eat even his blood relatives alive for the purpose. Don't make some twists and turns like love at first sight.
Hello author, the subject matter of your book is very good, I hope you can continue writing it. I hope there won't be any unnecessary emotions or stuff like stallions later in your writing.
When will the world change?
The writing is very good, but I hope that the protagonist will be humane, with love and hate, good and evil, so that it will be more immersive.
The author can find a way to ask other highly watched authors to help recommend the book, or recommend the book in other book review areas.
The author can divide the world into volumes and write about more popular themes in the next world, such as Spirit Cage, Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba, Jojo, Ghoul, One Punch Man, Dungeon, Hunter, Steel, Bleach, Certain Science, Kamen Rider, etc. Maintain a rigorous style, and don't let the protagonist's strength increase too quickly, otherwise it will easily become a brainless novel. You can have the protagonist compete with bosses from other worlds to set off the protagonist's strong character as a big boss.
I have read similar works to the author's on xx Cat, and they have achieved good results. It is better for the author to submit his manuscript there, and see which one has better results before putting it on the shelves. Of course, it may be better to change the title and cover according to my suggestions. I will vote for you there. After all, the results here are a bit poor so far, and the author's writing style and conception are obviously not bad.
Black light virus. T virus. G virus. Brother Corpse World Virus,**
Shouldn't you be more conscious?!
Four Bloods, one more thing to say, I like to read the behind-the-scenes boss novels the most, plus the perfection of all the worlds