The Pillar Who Ends Demon Slayer

Author, you are such a genius

The author also thinks that this funny style can be appropriately reduced. It will make you tired if you read too much.

Don't you know how to segment it? It's really uncomfortable to watch.

There are too few fans of the novel, and I feel like no one is reading it. I don't even know if I have the motivation to continue writing. I've been getting IV drips in the hospital for the past few days. I'm feeling better, I'm saying.

The author would like to give you some suggestions. In fact, you can put the character's dialogue into another paragraph. The use of quotation marks should also be clear. Sometimes I don't know whether it is the character's inner description or the verbal dialogue. It is best not to exceed three lines per paragraph. This will give readers a clean and neat feeling. Then the cover can be well designed. I also hope that your emotional description will be more detailed. You can use some small actions to express the character's heart. I hope you can check it in your spare time. This is a small suggestion from a reader. I hope you can adopt it.

I gave you a ticket and I cried for you

Md author, forgive me for using bad language, your opening chapter is so bloody, it makes me uncomfortable to see it.

It's too funny. Can you please stop being so funny after the death of your loved one and cry and laugh manually?

Updates are too slow, but everything else is fine.

40,000 Words and no hair, how miserable! Let me send you some flowers