Great Qin: I Refined the Elixir of Immortality

Are they all bragging about Qin Shihuang? Without the efforts of previous generations, where would Qin Shihuang be?! The second generation will be dead, don't brag too hard, okay?

The content is superficial and the writing style is too poor. It makes Qin Shihuang look like the author of Two Hundred and Fifteen, and the content and characters are similar to those written by primary school students!

Author, why does Shao Siming start talking as soon as he appears?

Everyone who can write novels is better than me, but what I wrote is just shit, and I can't read it! If you are so cheating, why don't you write a book and read it?

I'm speechless. You haven't studied history, have you? The Roman Empire (27 BC, ** year AD, the Western Roman Empire perished in 476 AD, and the Eastern Roman Empire perished in ** year) was a large empire centered on the Mediterranean Sea and spanning the three continents of Europe, Asia, and Africa. At that time, China was the Western Han Dynasty

What is written is shit. If the First Emperor can call himself the king, you are probably a **

Comments on chapter 0020: The weak and the strong (fifth update!) Of "Da Qin: I Refined the Elixir of Immortality" written by Sanyang Mao.

I need to practice more with this writing style.

Tian Yan is Tian Ci's sister. What you are doing now is Tian Yan who is not born yet.

My writing is a bit poor, I'd better practice more.