I took part in the Holy Grail War, and in the end, I held the Holy Grail in my hands and won the glory of victory!
I also entered the Root, and once lived a 'happy' life with Ryougi Shiki for a time!
I challenged the two Heretic Gods, the God of War Veleslana and the King of the Gods Marduk. People call me a God Slayer!
I saved the tragic fates of Magical Girl Madoka and Homura Akemi. After that, magical girls no longer had tragic endings!
I helped a certain blonde girl establish peace in Gensokyo. Some people even call Reimu and me the Gensokyo city guards!
I once munched on sunflower seeds in front of the Lord of Four Seasons' Flowers and plucked sunflowers! That's why some youkai call me a real man!
I once turned Daigu into soup, crossed that out, and turned Daigu into light instead, filling the world with peace!
Even Aizen Sosuke, the transcendental being beyond Shinigami and Hollows, considers Urahara Kisuke and me lifelong rivals!
Saitama, the hero who does it for fun, is even willing to get serious so he can spar with me...
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They often use it to make fun of her, but Yuyuko cares about her age very much.
Waste controlled by the system!!! I want you to choose between ** and drinking urine!
Believe me, this protagonist is the most useless character I have ever seen.
Can the author change the title? I feel like Naruto is not as realistic as Gensokyo?
It looks like it's being forcibly unfolded. It's embarrassing. The protagonist's strength is too low and he's forced to do it. In Gensokyo, there's always a level 5 trumpet wandering around in the level 80 experience area and annoying the boss.
The author's writing itself is quite good. As long as he removes the poisonous points and writes more rationally, he should still be able to make money. I haven't written a book, so I can just have fun here, but I think what I said is reasonable. The protagonist said in front of Lan that he was Zi's man. Lan's first reaction was definitely not to take the protagonist to find Zi, but to directly destroy the protagonist with power.
I don't know what to say, but in this infinite world, Naruto's chakra is really nothing and has big flaws. That's almost something to choose from! It's all from Hokage, I don't know what to say. I suggest you reopen it and change the plot. And in Chapter 5, if you really dare to say that you are Zi in front of Lan, the man will definitely be beaten to death and nothing will happen next.
By the way, the three major poisonous points of Feilu are the abuse of the main character, the cuckolding, and the fact that the protagonist is plotted. In fact, I know you even if you say you don't abuse the main character, but Feilu is a great writing environment, which is irresistible. To use what others have said, the protagonist of Feilu can be weak, but cannot be useless. But now after reading it, I feel that the protagonist is an immature person. Although he has done some things, he always reveals his childishness.
It seems that this book will not include Zi and Yuyuko, otherwise the main character will be too green.
If a girl loses her virginity, it will be harmful to her husband. If members of the sex cannot hurt each other, it seems that there is no way to break her virginity.