Naruto: Founder of the Akatsuki

Personally, I think it's nonsense to think that you can travel to Hokage and go to Konoha to cause trouble and still be safe! Konoha can't even tolerate a hero, let alone a commoner! Therefore, in Konoha, it is only right to pretend to be useless and run away while doing tasks. Don't forget that if you show too much talent, you will die without knowing how. It would be best to go to the Land of Thunder, where there is the most unity.

I'm speechless. Casting S-level ninjutsu ten times is a shadow level. There are probably many shadow level masters in the Uzumaki clan, so how could they be exterminated?

Hanzo watched a live-action drama

Obliterate? Is there still such a system?!

How come I haven't heard of Jingdun?

Do the Uzumaki clan have black hair???

Besides, an eleven-year-old who is 1.7 Meters tall is too scary, isn't he so stupid? It's almost ok, a little over 1.7 Meters, I'm done with it, won't it grow in the later stages? You don't have anything radical to develop, why are you writing nonsense? When writing novels, you should pay attention to some reality. You must have a little bit of it. You are over 1.7 Meters tall when you are eleven years old, and you have not yet entered the real world of growing taller. Are you going to be more than three meters tall when you are about fifteen years old? You are a genius and an outstanding author.

Author, are you watching Mizukage Ninja? Nagato's own samsara eye? Konan knew ninjutsu before meeting Jiraiya? Did I watch fake Naruto?

The writing is pretty good, but there is one thing you need to change. In the Naruto anime, there are no chakra fruits, so how did they get their chakra?

Wasn't Nagato's Rinnegan given to him by Madara Uchiha?