At the beginning, three points are returned to the vitality, Pai Yun Palm, Tianshuang Fist, Fengshen Kicks, and the three magic gods catch Lin Mo and capture the real culprit of the fox demon murder case, which will reward him with two years of internal strength.
This is the Ming Dynasty, and it is also a Ming Dynasty with comprehensive martial arts! Here is the timid thief Bai Yutang who lives in seclusion in an inn, and there is also the scheming Zhu Wuwu who aspires to the throne!
Here is Ximen Chuixue who is as cold as ice and snow, and there is also Ye Gucheng who is a flying fairy from the sky with a sword coming from the west.
Here Dongchang Cao Zhengchun, who has the power to influence the government and the public, also has the four secret agents of the Baolong clan.
Here are Liu Ruoxin from Xichang, Qingqing from Shenhou Mansion, and Zhao Min from Meng Yuan, who invites the moon and pity the stars from Yihua Palace.
This novel and its characters are purely fictitious. Any similarity is purely coincidental and should not be imitated.
Reader comments
The biggest flaw of this book is that there is a useless master and a useless junior brother. The protagonist is completely like Voldemort. It would be fine if Lao Xing really saves the protagonist. He can always worship him like a father. The key is that Lao Xing has a deep understanding of the protagonist. There was no great favor at all, it was just to recruit the protagonist into his army at the beginning. In this way, the protagonist completely turned into the grandson of Lao Xing in the whole plot, and he had to devote all his efforts to win over Xiaoliu, his junior brother, and even use the precious marrow cleansing pill. . .
Yan Xiaoliu is not a good person. He becomes arrogant when he is proud. He shows no mercy when he punishes Lao Xing. He suppresses Lao Xing
When writing this work, the author probably didn't have any brains
The protagonist Phoenix Blood plus the entire Long Yuan cannot defeat the opponent's Grand Master Nakola Kao.
Halfway through the movie, the protagonist came up with a nameless skill and gave it to a bunch of people. He didn't even think of treating his friend Hua Manlou's eyes.
I was going to read it, but someone in the book review said that it is understandable to accept three apprentices. It is understandable to accept Tongtong. Even if you accept Mo Xiaobei, who does not know the depth at all, he can only cause trouble all day long. He can cause trouble without martial arts. With martial arts, you can't stir up troubles. If you accept the bad guy Long Xiaoyun, there is no need to read this book. Even if you don't kill the bad guy Long Xiaoyun, you will feel sorry for the readers. If you accept him as a disciple, many people will not read it.
It's boring to stay in that shabby hotel every day.
There is only one talented person like Ah Fei in the world. Unless Lin Xianer has that 100% loyal magic medicine, he is just a bomb. Have you read the original work? It's like your life and death talisman is unsolvable. The life and death talisman is just the use of yin and yang. Lin Xian'er is born cheap and can fall in love with anyone. Although Long Xiaoyun was a little frustrated, he got better after abolishing martial arts. Lin Xian'er is too sexy. As long as she doesn't die, she will give in.
The protagonist has never been domineering enough, I personally don't like it
Why are the system novels of Shelter stuck to the ground? It can be modified infinitely, so why not renovate the spaceship? Is there a forbidden air formation? Die in heaven? If the earth is not saved, then we can't develop in the universe? Isn't it a system? Isn't it infinite transformation?
A meteorite with a diameter of 100 meters can destroy half a province if it hits it. How can you, the protagonist with a diameter of 300 meters, run away?
If you look at the author's other books, this one may be a hit...
Beat Guo Furong and regain her vitality with three points?
The author writes that she likes the protagonist, but she is not lenient at all in planning to kill the protagonist. The protagonist would have died long ago without temporary system upgrades. She has always been the only one who planned the civil strife in the Ming Dynasty to kill each other. The protagonist's side has always only passively counterattacked, without attacking Meng Yuan. The protagonist could have killed her, so that Meng Nali would have no worries. He had been scheming against the protagonist, but he forced her to live for ** chapters. I didn't watch the rest of it, and was caught.
This font is so ugly, it's hard to read. The front ones are okay, but why is the recharge font at the back so weird?
As for how Zhou Zhiruo will be dealt with, please give me some happy words.
I spent 30 yuan and only read one or two hundred chapters. The whole book must have cost hundreds of dollars.
Wasn't Dong Xiaoyu dead at the beginning? Why did it come out again at 170 photos?
Are there any other books by this author?
Can you let Zhao Min die? It's too special to cause trouble.
First, three points of return to vitality, including fists, palms, legs, and fingers. After that, we created another 24 solar terms to surprise the gods. You can't practice weapons, just practice horizontally! ! !
The writing of this novel is okay, but the author should not make all the supporting characters mentally retarded, okay? A murderer who killed several people with a knife had a knife next to him, and the detective captain actually walked up to arrest the person, walked up to him? Are all criminal police captains so mentally retarded? Aren't they usually told to put down their weapons and squat down with their heads in their hands?
Why is it always eating halberds? It has seriously deviated.
The whole Xing Yusen gang. . .
The writing is **, really at the level of a junior high school student, without any derogation!
Has the author ever thought that if Tongfu Inn opened in Beijing, do you think Guo Furong would be able to get to Tongfu Inn? Is there any plot involving male and female evil spirits? When he went out in the morning, his father caught him and spanked him in the afternoon. He didn't understand what he was talking about.
I thought it was about a single heroine or no heroine, but it turns out it's a harem story. I was really spoiled by the stud's behavior.
Why don't you learn about the Great Shift of the Universe? Why don't you deal with it properly?
How many chapters do you plan to write in this book?
Volume 10 I suddenly paused. . Fengyun started to lose interest in that world. Does it still look good now? . . I don't know if I should continue, it's too long. Also, are there any good martial arts fics out there? I think the main character in this one is pretty good.
The biggest flaw of this book is that there is a useless master and a useless junior brother. The protagonist is completely like Voldemort. It would be fine if Lao Xing really saves the protagonist. He can always worship him like a father. The key is that Lao Xing has a deep understanding of the protagonist. There was no great favor at all, it was just to recruit the protagonist into his army at the beginning. In this way, the protagonist completely turned into the grandson of Lao Xing in the whole plot, and he had to devote all his efforts to win over Xiaoliu, his junior brother, and even use the precious marrow cleansing pill. . .
Yan Xiaoliu is not a good person. He becomes arrogant when he is proud. He shows no mercy when he punishes Lao Xing. He suppresses Lao Xing
When writing this work, the author probably didn't have any brains
The protagonist Phoenix Blood plus the entire Long Yuan cannot defeat the opponent's Grand Master Nakola Kao.
Halfway through the movie, the protagonist came up with a nameless skill and gave it to a bunch of people. He didn't even think of treating his friend Hua Manlou's eyes.
I was going to read it, but someone in the book review said that it is understandable to accept three apprentices. It is understandable to accept Tongtong. Even if you accept Mo Xiaobei, who does not know the depth at all, he can only cause trouble all day long. He can cause trouble without martial arts. With martial arts, you can't stir up troubles. If you accept the bad guy Long Xiaoyun, there is no need to read this book. Even if you don't kill the bad guy Long Xiaoyun, you will feel sorry for the readers. If you accept him as a disciple, many people will not read it.
It's boring to stay in that shabby hotel every day.
There is only one talented person like Ah Fei in the world. Unless Lin Xianer has that 100% loyal magic medicine, he is just a bomb. Have you read the original work? It's like your life and death talisman is unsolvable. The life and death talisman is just the use of yin and yang. Lin Xian'er is born cheap and can fall in love with anyone. Although Long Xiaoyun was a little frustrated, he got better after abolishing martial arts. Lin Xian'er is too sexy. As long as she doesn't die, she will give in.
The protagonist has never been domineering enough, I personally don't like it
Why are the system novels of Shelter stuck to the ground? It can be modified infinitely, so why not renovate the spaceship? Is there a forbidden air formation? Die in heaven? If the earth is not saved, then we can't develop in the universe? Isn't it a system? Isn't it infinite transformation?
A meteorite with a diameter of 100 meters can destroy half a province if it hits it. How can you, the protagonist with a diameter of 300 meters, run away?
If you look at the author's other books, this one may be a hit...
Beat Guo Furong and regain her vitality with three points?
The author writes that she likes the protagonist, but she is not lenient at all in planning to kill the protagonist. The protagonist would have died long ago without temporary system upgrades. She has always been the only one who planned the civil strife in the Ming Dynasty to kill each other. The protagonist's side has always only passively counterattacked, without attacking Meng Yuan. The protagonist could have killed her, so that Meng Nali would have no worries. He had been scheming against the protagonist, but he forced her to live for ** chapters. I didn't watch the rest of it, and was caught.
This font is so ugly, it's hard to read. The front ones are okay, but why is the recharge font at the back so weird?
As for how Zhou Zhiruo will be dealt with, please give me some happy words.
I spent 30 yuan and only read one or two hundred chapters. The whole book must have cost hundreds of dollars.
Wasn't Dong Xiaoyu dead at the beginning? Why did it come out again at 170 photos?
Are there any other books by this author?
Can you let Zhao Min die? It's too special to cause trouble.
First, three points of return to vitality, including fists, palms, legs, and fingers. After that, we created another 24 solar terms to surprise the gods. You can't practice weapons, just practice horizontally! ! !
The writing of this novel is okay, but the author should not make all the supporting characters mentally retarded, okay? A murderer who killed several people with a knife had a knife next to him, and the detective captain actually walked up to arrest the person, walked up to him? Are all criminal police captains so mentally retarded? Aren't they usually told to put down their weapons and squat down with their heads in their hands?
Why is it always eating halberds? It has seriously deviated.
The whole Xing Yusen gang. . .
The writing is **, really at the level of a junior high school student, without any derogation!
Has the author ever thought that if Tongfu Inn opened in Beijing, do you think Guo Furong would be able to get to Tongfu Inn? Is there any plot involving male and female evil spirits? When he went out in the morning, his father caught him and spanked him in the afternoon. He didn't understand what he was talking about.
I thought it was about a single heroine or no heroine, but it turns out it's a harem story. I was really spoiled by the stud's behavior.
Why don't you learn about the Great Shift of the Universe? Why don't you deal with it properly?
How many chapters do you plan to write in this book?
Volume 10 I suddenly paused. . Fengyun started to lose interest in that world. Does it still look good now? . . I don't know if I should continue, it's too long. Also, are there any good martial arts fics out there? I think the main character in this one is pretty good.